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Depression's a part of existence, an affliction intrinsic to man. And when reality unravels, we are left to cope the best we can. Loneliness is all too familiar, you feel cornered; no way to retreat. And when life's non-receptive to dreams, you're dogged by failure and defeat. A wave of confusing emotions floods fledgling hearts as corrosive tears. And tides of regret raise as you sleep, stirring nightmares and dredging up fears. Trying to find a pathway to love; hope encourages hearts to take a chance. But when lies camouflage the truth dreams collapse as if pierced by a lance. Plagued by melancholy feelings, you’re mired in self-doubt, searching for norms. And with fate in desperation's grip, teardrops fuel emotional storms. Love's abandoned so hope may survive, trading promises for safer things. And you hunker down behind your walls, wishing you could flee on magic wings. (Quatrain) 5/14/2017

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Date: 5/23/2018 10:06:00 AM
Love how you finished this poem, Emile.
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Date: 5/23/2018 12:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Line, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 5/14/2017 10:11:00 PM
Love is the reason we breathe!
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Date: 5/15/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Etienne, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/14/2017 6:04:00 PM
despite the travails, i feel hints of hope in your splendid write, emile... a gem of a piece..huggs
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Date: 5/14/2017 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/14/2017 10:54:00 AM
I've found there is no escape from those emotional storms, not for a long time, but it does come. You've captured the write feelings in this write, Emile.
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Date: 5/14/2017 1:26:00 PM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/14/2017 10:09:00 AM
Emile, this is expressed so well and I really love the ending too :)
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Date: 5/14/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

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