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A New Version of Mary Had a Little Lamb

Mary had a little Lamb Little Lamb, little Lamb Mary had a little Lamb He was white as snow He died for me on Calvary Calvary, Calvary He died for me on Calvary He was white as snow Mary had a little lamb Little Lamb, little Lamb Revealing sin Everywhere He did go Unfinished

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2017 2:31:00 PM

really love this spiritual write

Linne Lanne

Date: 8/17/2017 11:15:00 AM

I am Sarah a snooty crow, i am a snooty crow, just like me father, Rooty Snow. His feathers are as black as the night, That is why mine are grey and white.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/17/2017 1:28:00 PM

Linne Lanne, Thanks for the visit to my page ..Good to meet you..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2017 4:17:00 AM

I really loved this write my friend, especially the second stanza, that one was very good! You have brought me a smile with this poem, thank you for doing that Sara! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/16/2017 7:25:00 AM

Russell, Thanks for the visit to my page..I do like the second stanza as well..Of course this is the song "Mary Had A Little Lamb" revisited by me..Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/15/2017 11:28:00 AM

I like the other version better. Have a nice day my friend.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2017 3:58:00 PM

Darlene, I do like the nursery rhyme and song "Mary Had A Little Lamb"...Mine is not up to par but I will work on it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2017 9:21:00 AM

Bravo Sara.... I will say no more:-):-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2017 3:56:00 PM

Jan, That one brought me a chuckle..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2017 12:39:00 PM

You inspired me to write one ...Mary had a little lamb/ she also had a cow/ the lamb still gambols in the field/ alas, the cow is mincemeat now lol:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2017 9:47:00 AM

Jan, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent here..I have a dental appointment then grocery shopping so I have a full day and don't know when I will be able to finish it maybe late tonight or tomorrow..Sara