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A New Sunrise I Will See

A NEW SUNRISE I WILL SEE
When blood is hot in your tender heart it flows in the veins with scarlet passion. Promises can be fallacious, you haven’t learnt for they tantalize you, a wrong perception. Mystique whirlpool the curious mind tries to explore, the veritable vortex of vile temptation sucks you in. You plunge to abysmal depth of disguised false lure, you can’t float for your disdained heart breaks within. No longer a stranger in my life you bewilder me, why your eyes of stars couldn’t see the dark night. Your ruins eviscerate my flowing feelings where I see you wash your mind clean of the filth of fated plight. You’ll rise like golden dust from the debris In my crimson sky a new sunrise I’ll see.
June 21, 2018

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Date: 7/2/2018 1:47:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Subimal, using so well the required words. Congratulations on your Podium placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/3/2018 12:11:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 6/30/2018 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent use of the 8 words. An impressive poem. :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/1/2018 4:04:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your nice comments.
Date: 6/29/2018 6:45:00 PM
I am pleasantly surprised Subimal. I thought this was another writer, you are quite adept at different styles, this was excellent, congrats on a fine win!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/1/2018 4:03:00 AM
Thank you, John for the placement. It encouraged me immensely. I try to adopt different styles.

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