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A Naked Bird

The feathers aid any bird’s flight. The owl at night. The hawk in day. They fly away. With feathers, they can reach great heights in awesome flights. Up in the air without much care. What good would be a naked bird? Something absurd. Defective genes may cause these scenes. Robert Pettit For Nette’s “Just a Minute!” contest. October 9, 2012

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Date: 10/29/2012 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Nette's "Just A Minute" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2012 8:51:00 PM
Funny write, Robert :) This poem may inspire some scientist somewhere to alter the genes of chickens so they wouldn't need to be plucked anymore GAH! Congratulation, Smiles from CYndi
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Date: 10/27/2012 11:28:00 AM
reading this created a funny picture in my mind...congrats on ur win...:))
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Date: 10/27/2012 9:59:00 AM
haha. It reminds me there really is a bird without feathers but I can't recall its name right now. Good one, Robert and congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/27/2012 4:03:00 AM
Big congratulations once again Robert, well done xx
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Date: 10/26/2012 10:58:00 PM
Many congrats Robert for this awesome win.
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:29:00 PM
Robert, congratulations in Nette's "JUST A MINUTE!" contest.. wishing you well.. xox~PD
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Date: 10/26/2012 8:47:00 PM
CONGRATS ROBERT ON A DYNAMIC WRITE AND WIN FOR THEME LUV ..
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Date: 10/10/2012 7:19:00 PM
very cleverly written! i enjoyed this...
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Date: 10/10/2012 3:25:00 PM
haha. I got a kick out of the last stanza. Way to do the Minute contest!!
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Date: 10/10/2012 1:33:00 PM
Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2012 10:17:00 AM
lol, yes, it would be permanently grounded. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )
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Date: 10/10/2012 8:38:00 AM
Nicely done, Robert...amusing and interesting.
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Date: 10/10/2012 5:06:00 AM
Nice work, What good would be a naked bird? Oven ready chickens!
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Date: 10/10/2012 2:42:00 AM
I love this Robert, specially the last stanza. All the best for the contest.
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