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A Musical Love

Clothes all wrinkled on the floor...
A pathway of roses to my door...
Like a sweet wine tasting, we sip...
Tasting each others love on our lips...
The radio is off but there are musical sounds...
Our voices harmonize as our bodies lie down...
As our toes curl in passion we melt into the sheets...
The temperatures outside are cool but in the bedroom
it is all about the heat...


Erotica contest....by F.H.
written by Michael J. Falotico
10/24/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/13/2011 7:44:00 AM
very good poem loved it
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Date: 11/5/2011 10:49:00 PM
michael;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/3/2011 9:18:00 PM
I just KNEW he would like this. A big congratulations to you, Michael.
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Date: 11/3/2011 6:20:00 PM
Evocative erotica. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/2/2011 4:47:00 PM
and the beat goes on... nice on, Michael, grats. Namaste~N
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Erotica" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:12:00 AM
Congrats Michael luv on a fantastic win with this visual delight for the contest luv.. always special are your wonderful words of luv and emotion and passion..now your J.G. needs a cold shower ..
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Date: 11/2/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Michael :)
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Date: 11/2/2011 7:54:00 AM
Michael congrats on your win, cool and sexy poem..loved it my friend..David
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Date: 10/30/2011 4:42:00 PM
Wow indeed! 'Tasting each others love on our lips...' says it all. best wishes always.
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Date: 10/30/2011 4:35:00 PM
wow, LOVE it!
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:43:00 AM
Such subtle passion expressed by a true lover. How I enjoy this. oooooh!
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:28:00 AM
Erotic but tasteful write. You got the balance right! Some good, poetic lines here. Good luck in the contest. Robert.
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:18:00 AM
oh yes.. oh more than yes,,Michael luv.. this is a hot number and erotica plus poetry luv.. good luck in Frank's contest.. the heat will rise to the top for sure.. new fav for the "Sweetheart" .. xoxo..J.G. in heat now..haha..
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Date: 10/24/2011 9:42:00 AM
feeling the heat.An enjoyable write.Best wishes in the contest Michael.
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Date: 10/24/2011 9:19:00 AM
wow, that is great!!! I love it! how are things going? cory
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Date: 10/24/2011 9:05:00 AM
Knocked off my feet, truly fantastic write...best of luck in the contest...luv shannon
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Date: 10/24/2011 8:50:00 AM
Woohhooo... I sweat a bit while reading this... you transferred the heat in gracious way -Well, as always...- :)
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