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A Magic Mirror Meltdown

Evil Queen Her face, a jealous green The mirror on the wall Black heart could not forestall Snow White Her beauty did ignite Ruby lips and raven hair Seven dwarves were quite aware

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 5:28:00 PM

REally good one here, Mike. Congrats on the winners' list.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/29/2021 4:28:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea!

Joseph May

Date: 9/28/2021 6:50:00 AM

Congrats on your win Mike

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/29/2021 4:28:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph!!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2021 5:30:00 PM

Dropping back with many congratulations on your win Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/28/2021 4:13:00 AM

Thanks Jan xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/8/2021 7:24:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Mike, with this clever one ~ Sleepy (Yawn)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/9/2021 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Sleepy!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/8/2021 6:07:00 AM

How delightfully written, dearest Mike. Much enjoyed! Stay safe.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/8/2021 9:16:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/8/2021 5:24:00 AM

This is great Mike.! I see a winner here :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/8/2021 9:16:00 AM

Thanks so much Heidi!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/7/2021 3:54:00 PM

Well done Mike. Very apt for the contest.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/8/2021 4:03:00 AM

Thank you Vijay!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/7/2021 1:19:00 PM

You rose well to the challenge Mike, glad my grandkids enjoy them, gives me a chance to enjoy them again. Good luck Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/7/2021 2:28:00 PM

I love them still myself! Thanks Tom!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/7/2021 12:56:00 PM

aww this is really clever , love the contrast with good v evil too:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/7/2021 2:28:00 PM

Thanks Jan xxoo

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/7/2021 12:15:00 PM

Good one, Mike. I am really enjoying reading these Clerihews. Good luck in the contest.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/7/2021 2:27:00 PM

Thanks Milton!, They are fun.