A Lover's Kiss

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I was inspired to write this by several soupers. I hope that you all like. I sure had fun writing it .Enjoy:-) Alexis

Once upon a time in a far away land lived a beautiful maiden the fairest in the land. An evil and jealous witch casted a spell on her that put her in a deep sleep. One kiss from her true love was the only thing that would break the spell. Two long years went by before she was awakened by her lover's kiss.She was so happy until....... she saw her one and only " You, Where is the witch? I want to go back to sleep now"! She was livid because he was the boy next door that got on her last nerves. And she couldn't stand him. And they lived unhappily ever after . The End 12-5-16 Alexis Y

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Peter Dome

Date: 12/12/2016 2:04:00 AM

I love a happy ending. I can picture you're words so clearly. What a talent. Well done. enjoyed it very much.Best wishes. Pete.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/11/2016 12:51:00 PM

Very clever. I like the twist very much. A 7 & a fav.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2016 12:56:00 PM

Hi Afzal, Thanks for such a great comment. Thanks for 7 and the fave:-) Alexis

Paloma P

Date: 12/6/2016 6:44:00 AM

I'm not sure whether to laugh or cry. Sounds like many marriages. :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/6/2016 7:44:00 AM

Hi Paloma, It's nice to see you. I haven't seen you around lately. I rewrote the classic tale to give it a humorous twist at the end. But I can see why you feel like that. I appreciate your thoughtful comment:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/5/2016 4:56:00 PM

Real funny poem, Alexis. An anti-fairy tale, unhappily-ever-after ending. Very creative, and super hilarious. You sharpened your pen on this one. Loved it though.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/5/2016 7:24:00 PM

Hi Freddie, Thank you so much for such an awesome comment. Your support means alot to me my poetic friend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2016 3:57:00 PM

ha ha ha love the twist at the end Alexis :-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/5/2016 7:17:00 PM

Hi Jan, Thank you so much. I got the inspiration to write this piece from you and others. I'm glad you liked it:-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 12/5/2016 3:37:00 PM

Wow, talk about a rude awakening. How rude!!! :) This was funny Alexis and cool because I have also been writing poems today about kissing. Must be the trend I think. : )

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/5/2016 7:14:00 PM

Hi Chris, Lol! That was some awakening! Thanks for the nice comment. I appreciate that you were the first to comment: -) Alexis PS, off to go view your "kissing" poems.