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A Look Within

Should a man dare to look within? Search secret places of hidden sin? The lack of which could be exhilarating, But those long loss, debilitating. Even those revealed can be a gift, Confession, forgiveness, they could give a lift. Or an insight into his authenticity, Could open his eyes that he might see. Through the illusion, that’s let him astray, Guiding him back to his intended way. Leading to personal responsibility, Helping him become all he can be. All men have sinned, falling short of perfection, Often frustrated by their illusionary perception.

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/20/2022 2:31:00 PM

A strong message here, Bill that we need to heed and follow. Personal responsibility is so vital in living a conscience based life. A very thought-provoking sonnet. All the best, Brian

Bill Baker
Date: 1/28/2022 3:34:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughtful comments, Brian. The most purposeful course I ever taught while teaching High School was, Personal Responsibility. I have been fortunate to hear from many ex-students over the last twenty years, gives thanks for how much the course has helped them in life. Have a great week! Bill

Valsa George

Date: 12/7/2021 8:15:00 PM

Illusory perception is the main cause of our shortcomings. An introspection into the self will give us clearer picture of who we really are. It will give us a chance to correct ourselves and become better humans ! A well crafted sonnet with lofty thoughts, Bill

Bill Baker
Date: 12/8/2021 7:26:00 AM

Thank you for your mindful comments, Valsa. They resonate with my spirit within. A poet friend, Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/7/2021 7:20:00 PM

99%, Bill. 'All men have sinned...' except for you and me, of course. And, by the way, I'm not so sure about you... lol. Nice write. :) Gershon

Bill Baker
Date: 12/8/2021 7:28:00 AM

The error could be in calling what I've done are not done sin, could I've definately error many times. lol Thanks for the comment my friend. Bill

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/7/2021 3:45:00 PM

Great write, Bill

Bill Baker
Date: 12/8/2021 7:29:00 AM

Thanks for reading my poetry, Debra. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/7/2021 8:22:00 AM

Cognisant mindful eye sees all! Great write, Bill, very meaningful

Bill Baker
Date: 12/8/2021 7:30:00 AM

Thank you my friend in India. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lin Lane

Date: 12/7/2021 7:10:00 AM

I believe it to be a necessity to look within to right a wrong, confess a sin. It's the only way I know of to keep a conscience clear.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/7/2021 7:33:00 AM

Good way to start each day. I agree with your thinking, Lin. Have a great day! Bill