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A Little Breeze

A little breeze is sure to please When temperatures are climbing, So I will seize this tiny tease To do some outdoor rhyming. The radio is saying, though, The weather will be brutal. If that is so, then what I know Is thinking will be futile. So while I'm out, I will not pout But sit and jot these verses, For there's no doubt no poems will sprout In hotter temps - just curses!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/15/2021 3:32:00 AM
I see a theme today; I have a feeling you are feeing the sluggiish power of August's heat. Still your rhymes are jazzy.
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Date: 8/13/2021 11:18:00 AM
Well thought and scribed! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/12/2021 5:47:00 PM
Love the feel of the sweat rolling off my fingers onto my pen, down the paper --- and then all over again... :)
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Date: 8/12/2021 4:30:00 PM
Enjoyed!
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Date: 8/11/2021 3:39:00 PM
A very satisfying serving of rhythmic rhymes, Ilene....and an a propos comment on recent weather!
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