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A Lament For My Uncle, As His Day Approaches

Steel resolution, made a thousand times To reach across black rift between closed hearts Carefully constructed, a thousand lines Rose incantation, enchanted restart Dim hourglass of the blind excuse dancer Clings desperately to its final grains Dark wolf’s mouth slavers, he smells your cancer Speak now, or forever we keep these pains Knock on your door, thunderous echoes fade Younger guilt and fear restrain me no more Resolve not weakened, steady hand not stayed Blade drains poison, flowing blood you ignore One thing stands clear at your onrushing end: It takes just one to break, but two to mend. 4/26/16 ©

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Date: 7/17/2016 5:59:00 PM
Tom, Great Penned sonnet win.... SKAT
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:32:00 AM
A great work all throughout Tom! Congratulations! :) _Hans
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/1/2016 11:38:00 AM
Thank you, Hans, and thanks for reading!
Date: 5/30/2016 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/30/2016 8:43:00 PM
Thanks, Joyce!
Date: 5/30/2016 6:25:00 PM
Ah EXCELLENT and a 7. Perhaps since I lost a husband to Cancer very young, I sincerely Grok this one. You used such artistry and honesty in your choice of the dark words. This was no easy feat to tell of the pain of cancer. . . And the loss.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/30/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thanks, Edlynn! I appreciate your words.
Date: 5/30/2016 6:00:00 PM
Tom, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/30/2016 8:46:00 PM
Thanks, Laura!
Date: 5/30/2016 4:47:00 PM
A very sad and beautiful sonnet,,,Congratulations
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/30/2016 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, Janis!
Date: 5/30/2016 4:11:00 PM
So powerful and sad, Tom. You have expressed this pain so well in your well-written Sonnet. Congrats on your win in the contest. Sandra
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/30/2016 8:47:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 4/28/2016 7:10:00 AM
So sad that I felt the blackness in that coming cloud.. Top level poetry my friend. At7 and ADDING TO MY FAV LIST. SOUPMAIL ON THE WAY.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/28/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thanks, Robert!
Date: 4/27/2016 1:46:00 AM
Powerful write, Tom: The final line is awesome. Forgiveness heals the one who forgives as well as the one who receives that forgiveness. Best, SuZ
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/27/2016 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Suz!

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