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Night's silent shadows softly fall from moonlight's muted, mellow glow, that shroud the land with sunless shawls on cold ground glazed with glinting snow. Tree branches, seen with broader breadths by shadows that bestow their form, splayed stark atop the snowy depths; by wind, they swirl like snaky swarms. Small bushes sway between the trees to shadow snow like ghastly ghosts that dance deceptively to tease and harrow wary human hosts. Pure, peaceful pageantry at night; such lovely landscapes, to be viewed. But, sometimes shadows strain our sight- with varied visions misconstrued. March 27, 2018 Premiere Contest: 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 6 Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/10/2022 9:43:00 AM
The night pageantry is so alluring. Your highly alliterative poem imparts the splendor, serenity and beauty of the cold moonlit night.... ! A joy to read. ..........Congratulations Sandra !
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/12/2022 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa, for reading my poem, your congratulations, and lovely comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 7/9/2022 9:34:00 AM
Congrats Sandra, this is another beautiful piece from one of Poetry Soup’s most talented writers.
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Date: 7/12/2022 10:22:00 AM
Thanks, Mark, for your visit, congrats, and very kind comments! Sandra
Date: 7/9/2022 5:41:00 AM
Sandra, everything that has been said below. All I can add is that your wonderful rhymes feel so natural and not forced in any way whatsoever. This is pure poetry. Cheers - Gary
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/12/2022 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, Gary, for reading my poem and for your very uplifting comments! Sandra
Date: 7/8/2022 1:07:00 PM
Sandra, the human soul doesn't seem to trust the night and so we misconstrue artistic shadows into ghosts and omens. How beautifully you have portrayed these nighttime paintings in your lovely poem, crafted with such stunning imagery, cadence, and alliteration. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 7/12/2022 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, John, for your visit, congrats, and very kind comments! Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 7/8/2022 12:41:00 PM
Sandra, your alliteration is a sweet sensation! Your last two lines are brilliant. And your excellent GIF nicely displays the "Silent Shadows on the Snow." Congratulations on your win on Mile 6 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 7 has already started!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/12/2022 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mark, for my nice placement in your Mile 6 Contest, and for your congrats and uplifting comments!
Date: 9/22/2021 9:42:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your beautiful poem, excellent writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 4/24/2019 8:18:00 PM
Sandra, you should be teaching poetry. This beautiful poem is so impressive that someone without sight could view the scene just as well as someone sighted. You alliteration as well as your imagery is simply stunning in this masterpiece. One of your best and I am putting this gem into my faves! Congratulations on your deserving top win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/27/2019 7:53:00 PM
Wow, Connie...you are so kind with these wonderful uplifting and supportive comments. Thank you so much for your positive thoughts, congrats, and the fave! I always appreciate your visits and encouragement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/14/2018 5:10:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Sandra, for your excellent win with your stunning poem of superb alliteration. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/17/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! I am again honored with your very supportive and uplifting comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/14/2018 2:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful imagery. Enjoyed.
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Date: 7/17/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. I always appreciate your visits and support! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/3/2018 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/9/2018 2:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/3/2018 3:41:00 PM
Lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/3/2018 7:42:00 AM
Beautiful...simply beautiful. Many congrats.
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine, for your visit, congrats, and very uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/2/2018 7:47:00 PM
Sandra ... I really LOVED this poem! It just really stood out to me. The image is perfect!! And your use of alliteration with the amazing rhyme makes me love it even more! Congrats on your win! Judy
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Judy, for your congratulations and uplifting, heartfelt comments. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. Thanks again! Hugs, Sandra :)
Date: 4/2/2018 8:43:00 AM
A cool poem along with your visual! Congrats on your haunting write!
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thanks, Kim! I appreciate your congrats and very supportive comments. I was pleased to find that visual to match the mood! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/1/2018 10:04:00 PM
Beautifully written ... Congratulations on your excellent win ...
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Probir! I appreciate your visit, congrats, and positive comments. Sandra
Date: 4/1/2018 7:23:00 PM
Oh how enchanting Sandra. Your imagery is absolutely stunning and your alliteration is simply superb. Beautiful and enthralling poetry. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:41:00 PM
Hi, Susan, thank you again for your visit, congratulations, and your lovely, uplifting comments. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/1/2018 3:26:00 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thank again, Anne-Lise, for your nice visit and, as always, your congratulations and heartfelt comments. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/1/2018 2:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Sandra and nice use of alliteration.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:38:00 PM
Thank you, SO! I enjoyed writing this poem for your contest and I appreciate my nice placement. Thanks again! Sandra :)
Date: 3/28/2018 1:09:00 PM
Your words paint such a beautiful picture, Sandra, I love the imagery.
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Date: 3/29/2018 6:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes, for your lovely, supportive comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/28/2018 3:01:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, a fave! Good luck with the contest... Mick
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/29/2018 6:58:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mick, for your positive comment and the fave! So nice of you! Sandra
Date: 3/27/2018 10:18:00 PM
Quite a delightful poem, Sandra! mysterious, captivating, wonderful!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/29/2018 6:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, James, for your visit and uplifting comments. Much appreciated! Sandra

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