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A Fellow Named Jack

There once was a fellow named Jack Who thought he was ahead of the pack Till one day in autumn He fell on his bottom And his brains fell out on the track © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 11/10/2013 7:34:00 PM
trap rehten ym morf nwod-edispu tnemmoc siht gnitirw m'I
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Date: 11/10/2013 8:18:00 PM
ROTFLMAO !!!!!!!! Wondered what the hell language it was... then clued in! LOL LOVED IT... you is MY kinda gal Licia !!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxox
Date: 11/10/2013 11:55:00 AM
Uh-oh, I have some *serious* competition here, my dear Jack!! Let the Games begin LOL. An excellent limerick, dear friend :) xox
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Date: 11/10/2013 12:08:00 PM
Clear the track... here comes Jack!!! Nothing to worry about my dear Miss Wattle... you is the Queen of Limericks!!! Love and big hugz xoxoxoxxox
Date: 11/9/2013 8:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim!!! I usually stick to quatrains only but Miss Wattle has me interested in trying some limericks... they are fun! Love and hugs, Jack xoxox
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Date: 11/9/2013 8:30:00 PM
Ooops wrong box!!! LOL
Date: 11/9/2013 8:11:00 PM
Fantastic limerick, Jack! Made me laugh! You have a great sense of humor. Love, Kim
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Date: 11/9/2013 8:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim!!! I usually stick to quatrains only but Miss Wattle has me interested in trying some limericks... they are fun! Love and hugs, Jack xoxox
Date: 11/9/2013 7:52:00 PM
Aha ha ha, oh you crack me up Jack! You are probably the funniest one here on the Soup my friend! I surely loved reading this delightful poem this evening! It's nice to read you at night! This is an extremely wonderful piece, I laughed out loud when I read it! What a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:59:00 PM
WOW Now THAT'S a compliment, my good friend! Thank you Russell!
Date: 11/9/2013 7:14:00 PM
Priceless...one of your best! BG
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:57:00 PM
Wow!!! That's a surprise my dear Barbara... maybe I should write more! LOL Thank you! Hugs, Jack xoxox
Date: 11/9/2013 6:36:00 PM
I love to reread this funny limerick Jack..Ouch beware you dnt fall in Spring..Ouch that bottom on a rose blossom..: )Big smiles and tnks for that.
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:53:00 PM
You are always soooo sweet my dear Charmaine! LOL Love and hugs, Jack xoxoxox
Date: 11/9/2013 5:16:00 PM
OH JACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You ARE funny! HA HA HA! Silly you! Do be careful! ;) HUGS!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2013 5:23:00 PM
What a silly old man eh! Hope you are having a wonderful weekend, my love!!! Kenny sends huggles to you sweet lady xixixixix
Date: 11/9/2013 4:43:00 PM
Dragon said "Not to Worry"... We'll be there with a shovel... as fast as we can!... No Dragon... he won't need bejewels and eye liner... But yes you can bring those cute Smurf Bandages... Bet you can't wait till we get there... LOL!
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Date: 11/9/2013 4:48:00 PM
You're not suggesting that's where my brains are located are you!!! LOL Big hugs Miss Carol xoxoxox