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A Fellow Named Jack

There once was a fellow named Jack Who thought he was ahead of the pack Till one day in autumn He fell on his bottom And his brains fell out on the track © Jack Ellison 2013

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Delysia Hendricks

Date: 11/10/2013 7:34:00 PM

trap rehten ym morf nwod-edispu tnemmoc siht gnitirw m'I

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/10/2013 8:18:00 PM

ROTFLMAO !!!!!!!! Wondered what the hell language it was... then clued in! LOL LOVED IT... you is MY kinda gal Licia !!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxox

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/9/2013 8:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim!!! I usually stick to quatrains only but Miss Wattle has me interested in trying some limericks... they are fun! Love and hugs, Jack xoxox

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2013 8:30:00 PM

Ooops wrong box!!! LOL

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/9/2013 8:11:00 PM

Fantastic limerick, Jack! Made me laugh! You have a great sense of humor. Love, Kim

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2013 8:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim!!! I usually stick to quatrains only but Miss Wattle has me interested in trying some limericks... they are fun! Love and hugs, Jack xoxox

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2013 7:52:00 PM

Aha ha ha, oh you crack me up Jack! You are probably the funniest one here on the Soup my friend! I surely loved reading this delightful poem this evening! It's nice to read you at night! This is an extremely wonderful piece, I laughed out loud when I read it! What a grand poem, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2013 7:59:00 PM

WOW Now THAT'S a compliment, my good friend! Thank you Russell!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/9/2013 7:14:00 PM

Priceless...one of your best! BG

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2013 7:57:00 PM

Wow!!! That's a surprise my dear Barbara... maybe I should write more! LOL Thank you! Hugs, Jack xoxox

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/9/2013 6:36:00 PM

I love to reread this funny limerick Jack..Ouch beware you dnt fall in Spring..Ouch that bottom on a rose blossom..: )Big smiles and tnks for that.

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2013 7:53:00 PM

You are always soooo sweet my dear Charmaine! LOL Love and hugs, Jack xoxoxox

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/9/2013 5:16:00 PM

OH JACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You ARE funny! HA HA HA! Silly you! Do be careful! ;) HUGS!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2013 5:23:00 PM

What a silly old man eh! Hope you are having a wonderful weekend, my love!!! Kenny sends huggles to you sweet lady xixixixix

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/9/2013 4:43:00 PM

Dragon said "Not to Worry"... We'll be there with a shovel... as fast as we can!... No Dragon... he won't need bejewels and eye liner... But yes you can bring those cute Smurf Bandages... Bet you can't wait till we get there... LOL!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/9/2013 4:48:00 PM

You're not suggesting that's where my brains are located are you!!! LOL Big hugs Miss Carol xoxoxox