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A Diamond In Your Eyes

Holding you close in my arms I am captivated with your charms Looking at you straight in the eyes I saw diamonds added with smiles You are so adorable my precious child To be near you my heart went wild You are the greatest gift from above You are my priceless gift I’ve ever had The way your eyes move from side to side So cheerful, so happy that cannot hide Your eyes glistened like diamonds in my life My sweet little baby, I will hold you tight *5th Place *For Gail Doyle's "A Diamond In Your Eyes" Contest. *Written by: Maria Paz Samelo * October 05, 2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2013 10:30:00 PM

aha, I found one that I have not read yet. And AHHHH, it's adorable!!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/19/2012 1:53:00 PM

Splendid write Maria......congrats on your win! Hugs

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/12/2012 7:11:00 PM

Really lovely and innocent. Great outcome in Gail's contest Maria - Congrats - Shaz

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/9/2012 10:41:00 PM

CONGRATS MARIA ON A GLORIOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2012 8:35:00 PM

MARIA, congratulations, with your awesome poem in Gail's contest..... xox~pd

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/9/2012 10:13:00 PM

so much thanks to you my friend PD. Good day :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/9/2012 3:13:00 PM

beautiful write Maria...congrats on your win

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/9/2012 10:13:00 PM

thanks friend Joseph :) hugs!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/9/2012 2:37:00 PM

Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/9/2012 10:14:00 PM

thanks friend Debbie..have a nice day always!! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2012 10:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Diamond" contest Maria. Love, Carol

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/9/2012 10:15:00 PM

thanks dear friend Carol and thanks also for giving me a change to win in your contest..so happy!!!! hugs from me :)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/9/2012 8:33:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS MY DEAR FRIEND! YOU MADE IT AGAIN. I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU! HUGS:) LEONORA

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/9/2012 10:30:00 PM

thanks my dear friend Norie...w/o you I'm not be here...mwuah!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/6/2012 8:42:00 AM

lovely this is Maria,

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/9/2012 10:30:00 PM

thanks Harry :)

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/6/2012 7:15:00 AM

great write Maria,squeeze

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/9/2012 10:36:00 PM

thanks friend Richard

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/6/2012 6:47:00 AM

Mercy me, Maria...you got me a little misty-eyed here!...Brings back so many wonderful memories too...Thank you for the privilege of reading this poem of yours this morning - Tim P.S....You got a winner here too!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/9/2012 10:37:00 PM

Thanks Friend Tim, I really appreciate you nice comment :) hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2012 10:27:00 PM

this is wonderful. I know Gail will adore this one.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/5/2012 10:43:00 PM

thank friend Andrea for your nice comments...Good Day always! (^_^)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/5/2012 8:32:00 PM

This is soooooo beautiful my dear friend. I love it!!!!!!! I am pretty sure this will win again!!! hugs:) Leonora

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/5/2012 10:40:00 PM

thanks to you my ever loving and supportive friend..without you I'm not be here..just to tell you how grateful I am to be your friend.. mwuah!!!!!!!!!!!!! (^_^) God bless you always

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/5/2012 7:45:00 PM

Nice delightful write. Collectively, your words convey a cute little message.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/5/2012 10:38:00 PM

many thanks friend Robert for your comment :) Good day

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/5/2012 4:46:00 PM

Maria; This is so beautiful. I am so glad that you wrote it for your baby. They are our treasures. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/5/2012 10:38:00 PM

thanks friend Lucy.. (^_^)

Date: 10/5/2012 4:07:00 PM

sweet write Maria....best wishes..

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/5/2012 10:32:00 PM

thanks friend :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/5/2012 2:26:00 PM

A real gem - great for the contest or just to read.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/5/2012 10:31:00 PM

thanks friend Joann..Good day always!! (^_^)

Joann Grisetti
Date: 10/5/2012 2:27:00 PM

And read again.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2012 2:08:00 PM

- Maria, you are a real diamond - Lovely written - thumbs up for you in the contest, really hope that you will win. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/5/2012 10:30:00 PM

so much thanks my friend Anne Lise for your ever support..Have a blessed day always!! (^_^) hugs!