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A Declaration of Love

Madam, I wrote you a poem of honest words, true love declared. When I saw you that noon I fell, for your beauty beyond compare. Name not one man who desires you. I pray, dear, for your affection. I would give all, borrow, or rob for your grace in sheer perfection. Then dream upon your auborn hair, you outshine the moon, sun and stars. All creatures from lions to lambs gently admire you from afar. A summer sky filled with sunshine could not compare to you, my love. A kiss from you, better than wine, to embrace you would be divine.
By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, March 28,2012 for Palindrome Mad Contest (David Williams) Ninth place Palindromes used -- madam, noon, name not one man, borrow or rob

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Date: 4/25/2012 1:13:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Very good job..Sara
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Date: 4/23/2012 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2012 6:34:00 PM
Phew at least I do understand what YOu did! GOOD one! Congrad's on your Big win Light & Love
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda. Wonderful piece. Great job. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:36:00 PM
Well done Rhonda, Congratulations xx
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Date: 3/28/2012 10:06:00 PM
wow, I sure hope I will be able to figure this one out. You did AWESOME!
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Date: 3/28/2012 8:57:00 PM
Updated now and hopefully much better!
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Date: 3/28/2012 4:04:00 PM
Hi everybody, the above word are not palindromes. Please don't follow my example. It's back to the drawing board for me. Blessing Rhonda
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Date: 3/28/2012 1:26:00 PM
clever piece, Rhonda - lovely too
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Date: 3/28/2012 1:19:00 PM
Rhonda, your poem is just beautiful, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 3/28/2012 11:19:00 AM
I was wondering why you used rats - thought it was a little odd in such a romantic poem :) makes sense now. good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/28/2012 10:43:00 AM
A romantic piece Rhonda! Love encapsulated... beautiful!
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Date: 3/28/2012 9:33:00 AM
a lovely dramatic piece Rhonda .. must check this new contest out today luv.. much success as this one shines a rare beauty.. hope your day is very blessed ..
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Date: 3/28/2012 7:40:00 AM
Wow ~ awesome Rhonda xxx hugs
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