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A Daydream Delight

I looked,I saw an image blue a memory,fleeting yet true, midst the black,white and grey just awaiting me to portrait; I tried to re-capture this dream, reality's not how it seems, it flows & ebbs as morning mist, just out of reach,shadows persist; A high sun then dazzles my eyes, frustration,streams out soundless sighs, forever lost,this unique insight, when suddenly,I start to write Creative words,so surreal will my little song appeal ? | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/25/2021 12:28:00 PM
Hello Brain Strand, it is amazing wher our ideas come for creating poetry. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2021 10:09:00 AM
Hello Brian, I write down my ideas then make it a poem on piece of paper. Enjoy your weekend my friend.
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/26/2021 12:14:00 AM
Yes keep a notebook to hand,Darlene
Date: 9/25/2021 7:50:00 AM
yes ~ appeals. charming, Brian. Have a fabulous day!hap
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/26/2021 12:15:00 AM
Have a blessed day Line
Date: 9/25/2021 3:41:00 AM
Good that you had the daydream about this one and brought it to life to share with us. Your visit to my page affirms my work. Thank you. Sara
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/26/2021 12:16:00 AM
You too Sara,have the barnabas effect in your comments

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