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It pulls me in, that darker side So like a magnet, drawn- My thoughts, to end of life, Accepting that dimension's stage Without sunset and dawn- A blessed, eternal state. August 6, 2019 ~6th Place~ Contest: Keep It Brief Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Judged: 08/11/2019 Syllables: 8-6-6-8-6-6 - lines 2 and 5 must rhyme. Theme 4: "Everybody has a dark side. Some of us are better at hiding it than others." Quote from the movie, A Simple Favor, 2018

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Date: 8/31/2019 9:08:00 PM
Lovely Sandra
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Date: 8/12/2019 4:11:00 PM
very nice. And it ended positive after the dark part. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/11/2019 6:20:00 PM
love the last line..congrats sweet Sandra :)-luloo
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Date: 8/11/2019 3:56:00 PM
you have created a splendid image with fine rhyming, sandra...thanks for being part of my contest and warm congrats!
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Date: 8/6/2019 10:59:00 AM
there is something about darkness that lures people in its folds, but i also love the colors of it's edges that drip in crimson... nicely penned!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/6/2019 11:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, Sandra, with your supportive comment! Much appreciated!

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