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A Cold, Cracked Eggshell

My heart shattered glass My eyes twin rain clouds My sleeves wet rag cloths My sobs persistent freight trains My fingers frozen ice My surroundings a blurry dream I make the corners of my lips curve up for the people around me Even though I myself is a cold, cracked eggshell Only barely held together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/17/2012 7:26:00 PM
wow,you have a very cool style of writing. I see you as someone not native English speaker who is doing really well with imagery in this language. Great poem!
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