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A child's plea

Dirty rotten scum to take the life of an innocent one torn away from my childhood but not yet thrown into adulthood you've given me a life of pain certain to only knowing, that never again, will the days be the same but I have found my new freedom here, within these mighty walls known as Gods kingdom

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Date: 12/15/2020 3:14:00 PM
SO BEAUTIFULLY CRAFTED... SO NICE TO GO THROUGH IT.. THANK YOU FOR SUCH LOVELY POST...
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Date: 12/14/2020 1:36:00 AM
Child's freedom in the God's kingdom!
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Date: 9/26/2018 8:23:00 PM
Subject needs to be brought out into the open.
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D.A Hopkins
Date: 10/4/2018 11:25:00 AM
Seems like the subject matter is starting to be a more common news story than it has been in the past. So I think with each brave person who has, or will find strength and courage to bring their stories out we all begin to see we are 1, not alone and 2, we will not to be ashamed.
Date: 9/25/2016 7:25:00 PM
Denise- how sad. YES freedom in God's kingdom.for sure :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/24/2016 9:50:00 PM
Denise, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. :):):) Stop by my latest blog "Last Laugh." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/8/2013 5:13:00 AM
It is a pity that this poem has not beeen yet read by soupers. It is full of sensitiveness and I appreciate it
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