A Charge of a Atmosphere

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my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc… the meaning of the word (charge) is like a battery charge. this poem is about time and atmosphere being the charge of time. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.

free is freely of a change free is freely of a atmosphere a change is a change of a freely universe a change is a change of a freely atmosphere to freely change the universe is, to freely change the atmosphere a atmosphere is freely of a atmosphere to freely change the atmosphere, is to freely charge the atmosphere a atmosphere is a charge of a atmosphere to freely charge is to freely charge the atmosphere to freely charge is to freely charge the universe a charge of atmosphere is a charge of a universe a charge is a charging atmosphere a charge is a charging universe time is freely of time time is a freely of a freely time is a freely charge of time to freely charge time is to freely charge the universe time is time’s freely of time time is time’s freely charge of time

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/3/2019 9:25:00 PM

beautiful poem; specially last stanza touches me

Lucifer Very Very Very 1st
Date: 3/10/2019 3:17:00 PM

thank you for the time of day for your review,mahtab bangalee! poet,lucifer very very very 1st