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It Is About Love

O I am so sad now that she left for up above. Twenty years is a long time to love a cat, this sweet. A kitten came that fit my hand all fluffy and purring, she loved to cuddle all the long nights. I held her in my arms till her body was stone. And now I go to the place where I buried my beauty. I told my friends- no, no, more cats for this here girl. They say just give it time! Oh, oh my- days are empty, sometimes, I hear her soft meow call, calling for me, and that breaks my heart. Tears, now fall fall fall like rain on my new wee cat. ______________________________ August 23, 2018 Poetry/Concrete/It Is About Love Copyright Protected, ID 08-1054-414-23 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, A Brian Strand Visual sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/01/2022 First Place

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Date: 3/1/2022 1:22:00 PM
Awesome beautiful careful built concert verse, Constance. Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend
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Constance La France
Date: 3/1/2022 3:58:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 9/21/2018 2:43:00 PM
A lovely poem. Congrats on your win, Dear Heart.
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Date: 9/21/2018 3:44:00 AM
such a moving poem Constance, many congrats! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2018 3:37:00 PM
ohhhhh... I'm so sorry for your loss, Dear Heart.. Such a wonderful poem and design.. Congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/20/2018 10:00:00 AM
One word, meow! Wonderful heart filled composition Constance. You did a fantastic job. Thank you and congratulations! xomo
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Date: 9/20/2018 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance in your win. Great shape.
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Date: 9/19/2018 10:49:00 PM
This is very beautiful and moving Constance. I commend you on creating a difficult shape too. I would have placed this beauty higher, but then again, I am a cat lover! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 8/26/2018 4:41:00 PM
I love this, Constance. So inventive to use that picture of a cat. I always shy away from the shape and concrete contests. I which I could think something up for them!! My cat is still around but so aloof. It's like not really having a pet cat any more.
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Date: 8/24/2018 7:43:00 PM
This is beautiful, Broken Wings, both your moving poem and the poetry form. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/24/2018 10:53:00 AM
Great tail, Constance...a kitty kat concrete...best of luck...love & kittens...^WW^
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Date: 8/23/2018 8:04:00 PM
Lovely concrete poem, it's purrrfect!
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Date: 8/23/2018 6:56:00 PM
Lovely.....
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