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This poem belongs to those struggling with sons or daughters with drug abuse.

asking yourself questions that have no answers.

 

You hoped she'd be strong like an agave; instead, she bruised easily like a rose, feelings like silken petals carelessly scattered along paths she finally chose. Full of daydreams, she was given her room to search until able to find her roots. Her step hesitant among other blooms she followed, unthinkingly, larger shoots. One day you lost her in morning's cool mist hidden among thorns and those growing wild. Was your care not sweet as a lover's kiss? Or, was another keeping her beguiled? She was barely herself on many days, her eyes emblazoned by powerful lust. Poppy dust became her truest soulmate, the only bloom she was able to trust. If the rose was yours to love, not to grieve, would you allow her now to grow so free? Or, instead, place a cage around her leaves, stifling her inner spontaneity? A thousand painful nights you ask yourself; the answer possibly you'll never know. Do You relive memories scene by scene, until it becomes a bitter tableau? She needed more days to live and enjoy the good times that are now left unspoken. time to grow into a majestic bush before her stem bent, finally broken. You thought, as other parents may have done, all blossoms grow stronger in warm sunlight. Yet some are withered by the noonday sun; some perish quietly in a moonless night. She was a soft and delicate flower prone to bruises, yet eager to appease. On a summer's night, she silently left: a faded blossom on a gentle breeze.

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Date: 6/11/2021 9:18:00 AM
Very well written, Ann. I know it is hard to understand but usually it has nothing to do with the way one is raised. Most parents try to take the responsibility for a choice they did not make. I was that child. By the grace of God I survived to tell about it. I was a needle junkie in my 20's. A woman's love was what saved me. Not all are so lucky.
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/11/2021 2:59:00 PM
Oh, Daniel, congratulations! What a strong person you are. My friend's nephew, who lived with her, is on and off the street. She can't do it any longer. He doesn't care about himself. It's just so sad--so many young people affected. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 6/9/2021 11:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem captured feelings of parents perfectly.
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/11/2021 3:03:00 PM
Thank you for commenting, Rama. I've watched my friend go thru this with her nephew. It's just so sad.
Date: 6/9/2021 4:53:00 PM
Wow, there is a powerful message in your beautifully penned poem, Ann. It truly is sad how many of our youth become entangled in drug addiction. Thank you for sharing this!
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/11/2021 3:07:00 PM
Thank you for your comments, Laura. I've watched a dear friend suffer thru this with her nephew, who lived with her. It breaks my heart to see so many young people living now on the street.

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