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A Breath of Love To Stand On

"A Breath of Love to Stand On" I embrace a stand for love for love conquers issues of life to serenade emotions and formidable feelings because love is the secret substance the foundation which flourishes a breath of love to stand on to embrace ... I encompass a stand for love for love fulfills an earthly journey to touch humanity and offer tender empathy because love is the key opening reality the delicate weapon of choice a breath of love to stand on I encompass ... I enhance a stand for love for love intoxicates the senses to voice in symphony and cherish moments, rare, because love is the fashionable garment the heart and soul of existence a breath of love to stand on I enhance ... steadfast is my desire to spread love's bloom as a scented garden of petaled perfume a breath of love to stand on for everyone to consume. *For Debbie Guzzi's STAND Contest

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:29:00 AM

deep write.... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/17/2012 6:57:00 AM

Wow! so nice of you. Excellent piece of love for the world and humanity. Loved always, bl

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/16/2012 1:21:00 PM

An awesome write for Deb's contest. love phyl

Erich Goller

Date: 9/16/2012 10:04:00 AM

that's a ceautiful expressed story poem, nice flow, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you,Hugs!Erich

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2012 4:46:00 PM

Good luck in Deb's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Love is the key but is not an easy emotion in which to live life...Thanks for stopping by my work and leaving a kind review..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 9/15/2012 2:20:00 PM

beautiful write indeed, my friend. Congrats on all your wins : )

Kash Poet

Date: 9/15/2012 12:24:00 PM

Beautiful poem on the theme of the contest Linda!Love this!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2012 10:50:00 AM

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Wilma Neels

Date: 9/15/2012 9:08:00 AM

Linda, your title is just perfect for this gem.. Wishing you the best for the contest.. I am doing good thanks and you? Life is hectic at the moment so not much time for the soup ;( enjoy the weekend.. Love Wilma

Date: 9/15/2012 8:51:00 AM

This reminds me of the great commision. But in a world like ours this vision... this beautiful picture seem only half true. I wish that this was the scene everyday.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2012 7:42:00 PM

Linda, it says free verse, but I really like that cool pattern you were doing by reversing line one once you got to the final line. GREAT message in this one. Debs should really like it. I bet you had a great day seeing those "lovebirds"

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/14/2012 3:49:00 PM

Beautiful, Linda-Marie! I enjoyed reading your poem! Love, KIm

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/14/2012 1:37:00 PM

deeply touching write, sweets...you capture love's essence exquisitely with your words... hope your daughter's pregnancy goes well... it's raining here; winning huggs, luv!..:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2012 1:07:00 PM

Dear Linda, My bff... Thank you for inviting my over to your picnic... I imagine it to be a heart warming day for you. Your poem is beyond compare.. good luck in Debbie's contest..xox~ your bff forever... pd

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/14/2012 12:26:00 PM

another wonderful poem from you friend Linda-Marie. I like it. Good luck in the contest!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2012 9:41:00 AM

This certainly is a brilliant write my friend, simply brilliant! I really enjoyed reading this fine poem this morning! You have written a write straight from your loving heart Linda-Marie! I believe I am familiar enough with your heart to know the outpouring of love you share to many people, even myself, and this poem shows this love in full force, with beauty! This is an elegant piece my friend, I love it, Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2012 9:18:00 AM

luv is all and all is luv poets .. adding a few more lines momentarily as we r enjoying my youngest son Eric and his wife home with us awaiting new bBY 9/22 .. OH SO HAPPY .. MORE TO LUV ..