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A Bleeding Tear

___________________________________________________ Alone I Rest In Twilight Calm I Leave, A Whisper.. A Memory.. A Song.. Beneath soft boughs pale leaves of Autumn's death Surrounding her etched headstone Tumble through a pale moon Like a dried riverbed bed of lifeless breath A thirsting hunger taking its final toll And now the bitter truth cries within my soul As a memory of her beauty falls to death autumn waves goodbye cold wind blowing through the trees lavender skies fade in a worn leather journal words etched with a bleeding tear __________________________________________________ 09/02/2016 Challenge - Write One - Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/16/2016 1:34:00 PM
A beautiful piece Rick.
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Rick Parise
Date: 9/24/2016 7:12:00 PM
Thanks James........Have an inspiring day!!!!!!!Blessing's to you!!
Date: 9/10/2016 4:06:00 AM
Wonderful and lovely piece,Rick...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, olusegun - Love you name. From where do you dwell ?? Love & Light
Date: 9/9/2016 3:27:00 PM
Rick, such a beautiful poem, heavy with the sadness of your loss...echoed in your words..."autumn waves goodbye". Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra /// Love & Light
Date: 9/9/2016 1:02:00 PM
"Lavender skies fade" a pretty image. Congrats!
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Rick Parise
Date: 9/24/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, Kim /// Blessing's to you and yours!!
Date: 9/9/2016 10:50:00 AM
Rick, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sadly beautiful poem ~
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Chic-a-Dee // Blessing's to you!!!
Date: 9/9/2016 10:32:00 AM
This is one of the best entries that I have seen so far, Rick...very compact and poetic. Indeed a worthy winner! Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank You, Paul....// All the best to you. Love & Light
Date: 9/9/2016 9:19:00 AM
A deep emotive write, congrats and warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:06:00 PM
Thank you!!!!! Love & Light
Date: 9/9/2016 7:39:00 AM
Rick, I had a feeling this would be a high placement! well done and back with my congrats on your top placement!! Have a blessed day too :)-luloo
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Date: 9/3/2016 11:09:00 AM
Rick, so beautiful and you know how to carry the most wonderful flow...BW will love this! good luck :)-luloo
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Rick Parise
Date: 9/3/2016 1:44:00 PM
Thank You LL - Have a Blessed day!!!!

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