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A Bit Fractured

Upon attending “Her Requiem”, I felt a bit fractured and nearly insane When a fantasy of golden haze, wearing a shiny “Halo of Grace” Suggested it would be wise to take a “Journey to Spirit Mountain” And maybe chase some butterflies in a “Transformed” state Off I went, “Riding My Whims” into a glaring "Red Sun" morning To my chagrin, “The Goddess of War” struts in with utterly no warning Singing,-Girl you’re looking quite undone, it’s clear you're having no fun Those fractures in the brain are going to require some “Change”- The goddess continued her speech; but to her surprise I rolled my eyes while She sang, -We’ve been invited to imbibe with “The Castaway and the Scribe”- Well, the party was wild, folks drank all night, we all did the “Jive in a Beehive” I downed the “Zin”, as the “Lust” crept in to my shapely “Scarlett” dress, At the end of night I was seen hitching a ride to “Burn” my “Nemesis” "It's All In The Titles" Contest by Adam Hapworth 08/19/2013

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Mel Merrill

Date: 5/9/2014 12:41:00 AM

Hi Karen. Thank you for visiting my page, and for reading my stuff. Makes my day :) You write so well. Makes me wonder, why not more? Hugs...Mel

Karen Anglesey
Date: 5/9/2014 8:44:00 AM

Thank you for the encouraging comments ! I appreciate it. I really do need to focus more on writing ...thanks !

Robin Davis

Date: 12/7/2013 9:13:00 PM

karen Such a creative and fun write. You pulled the reader into a world of craziness and humor Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Vampire poem

Karen Anglesey
Date: 12/7/2013 9:15:00 PM

Robin, appreciate the comment. thank you :)

Stanley Cannon

Date: 11/19/2013 11:35:00 PM

This poem was well written and enjoyable to read.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/20/2013 12:23:00 PM

Thank you for commenting :)

Gina Young

Date: 11/13/2013 7:05:00 PM

Agreed, this is very nicely weaved together. A full story from titles. very nice.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/13/2013 7:14:00 PM

Gina, appreciate your visit. Thanks :)

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/3/2013 12:59:00 AM

Brilliantly done! too bad i came by a bit late for this contest anyway the flow was nicely weaved

Karen Anglesey
Date: 9/3/2013 6:34:00 AM

Danesh, thank you for commenting... have a lovely week :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/31/2013 9:55:00 AM

Karen, what a great entry. Nice flow to this one as well ;)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/31/2013 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Wilma... A wacky and fun ride to write :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/29/2013 4:11:00 PM

Very well done, Karen! Nice flow to your words here. Great imagery, too. Good luck in the contest! I have also entered this contest. Thank you once again for taking the time to read my work, and for the kind comments. I appreciate it!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/29/2013 7:49:00 PM

Kelly. thank you for commenting. I appreciate your positive feedback :)

Cherie Thomas

Date: 8/27/2013 2:55:00 PM

Excellent write, very cool flow:) <3. Cherie

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/27/2013 8:03:00 PM

cheri, glad you enjoyed the silliness.. thank you for commenting :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/26/2013 4:57:00 AM

Wonderful! Well done. A bit of fantasy, a bit of mystery.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/27/2013 8:02:00 PM

Monterey... thank you very much :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/24/2013 3:10:00 PM

WOW!!! Good one, Karen! I recognized some of the titles! :) Good luck on contest, my dear!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/24/2013 3:43:00 PM

Thsnk you for the great review:)

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/24/2013 2:15:00 PM

Splendid! A jamberee of the rough & nuts - a circus well worth making love to - the second stanza is so rich in dark mystery - love the droll personality - you're great Karen - I will FAV. file this - J.A.B. %

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/24/2013 2:51:00 PM

Well, I'm so splendidly surprised by your glowing review ...thank you

Painted Hunter

Date: 8/23/2013 6:43:00 AM

Are these all titles of yours?...very cool. I guess it's for a contest....you have an interesting way with words that is all you...and you made this poem fun. I enjoyed it...:)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/23/2013 6:46:00 AM

Cale. Thank you, it was written for All in the Titles contest. I didn't think I would come up with something but decided to give it a try. This is the result. :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/22/2013 9:16:00 PM

Quite entertaining. I loved it. People would be surprised to find how easy it is to write with the words already there. You nailed it.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/23/2013 6:33:00 AM

John, I was quite surprised how it came together. It was a very unique challenge . Thank you

Jack Horne

Date: 8/22/2013 5:03:00 PM

very clever piece indeed

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/23/2013 6:32:00 AM

jack, thank you for reading, much appreciated :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/21/2013 10:33:00 PM

Excellent. Very creative write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/22/2013 8:28:00 AM

Thank you for enjoying my chaotic mind ha ha

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2013 7:08:00 AM

how you put this all together mesmerizes, karen.. a really enchanting, engrossing write!..:) huggs

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/21/2013 9:02:00 AM

nette, thank you for the kind words... huggs to you :)

Lori Hopkins

Date: 8/20/2013 7:29:00 PM

this is a fun one! to read and to know what the challenge was! great imagery ~

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/20/2013 7:32:00 PM

Thanks, I re-edited again just before you read it... glad you enjoyed my wacky write :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/20/2013 3:21:00 PM

such an enchanting piece you put together with your titles...well penned! Good luck in the contest :)

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/20/2013 4:40:00 PM

Sandra, thanks for the most generous comment

John Posey

Date: 8/20/2013 9:52:00 AM

Very creative write.... should do well in the contest..... I wrote one some time ago titled "My Best To You", but not for this contest. It was composed of Titles only of my poems.... It is an acrostic you might enjoy..... Jake

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/20/2013 10:41:00 AM

Jake, thank you for visiting and for the nice comments. I will go check out your poem... :)

Saanvi Dua

Date: 8/20/2013 9:38:00 AM

WoW!! I absolutely adore and love this poem of yours !! Very powerful write !! :)) ..................Saanvi

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/20/2013 10:41:00 AM

Saanvi, thank you very much :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2013 8:39:00 AM

you did a great job with the titles Karen...well done

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/20/2013 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Joseph, I appreciate your comments :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/20/2013 7:55:00 AM

Ahh this was awesome! I highly enjoyed how it all flowed in this writing. Excellent!

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/20/2013 8:16:00 AM

Drake, thank you for your energetic comments :)

Shah Jehan Ashrafi

Date: 8/20/2013 7:30:00 AM

wonderful regards shah jehan

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/20/2013 8:16:00 AM

Thank you for visiting :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 8/20/2013 7:13:00 AM

Quite impressive. Check out mine titled IT'S ALL IN THE TITLES please. Love, always...Michael.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/20/2013 7:14:00 AM

Thank you Michael, I will check out your work.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2013 7:05:00 AM

Karen, you produced quite a story from your titles! WELL DONE!!! I think I can never have time to try this challenge because it will require me to peruse all my titles looking for something "just right." I am sure I will see this on the winners' list.

Karen Anglesey
Date: 8/20/2013 7:09:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for your glowing comments. Much appreciated :)