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A Baby Cries Deux

A Baby Cries, Demanding, Emphatic, Forming, Growing, Having Intelligence, Joy, Kindness, Love. Mounting Neuroses, Outrageous Propaganda, Quickly Remove Simple Truth, Unleashing Violence- Wanton, Xenophobic. Youthquake Zeitgeist! February 25, 2020 Abecedarian Contest Caren Krutsinger, sponsor

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Wendy Watson

Date: 2/25/2020 9:21:00 AM

A great final entry for Caren's contest, Mark. I loved the way you lulled us into sweet baby thoughts and characteristics then swiftly changed course. A brilliant final punch word too!

Mark Toney
Date: 2/25/2020 10:13:00 PM

I appreciate your summation, Wendy, and your kind words of encouragement! ~Mark

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/25/2020 3:09:00 AM

WoW! Mark, You’ve done a good job with the contest challenge. Great content as well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Mark Toney
Date: 2/25/2020 8:58:00 AM

Alexis, thank you for your very encouraging comment. You've made my day! I really enjoyed your Abecedarian poem "The Wonders of Nature." ~Mark