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A Flame Once Burned

The flame that once burned in that mortal shell through life and love that sparked many emotions It was now gone forever, its fire quelled It had burned through many storms upon life's ocean In tears and laughter, it would continue to burn Through life and love that sparked many emotions When the flame dimmed and flickered, it caused some concern would it blaze back and resume its dance? In tears and laughter it would continue to burn Time had stolen much of its radiance The time of its end had finally come would it blaze back and resume its dance? But this once great flame did finally succumb had flickered awhile before going out The time of its end had finally come Of its end there was no doubt The flame that once burned in that mortal shell had flickered awhile before going out It was now gone forever, its fire quelled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/3/2013 11:26:00 AM
I am forced to favor anyone who handles this form so well. .....reading your winning Terzanelle renders it easy to admire... Congrats on your win.....Jake
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Date: 7/30/2013 2:45:00 PM
I reaaly like this poetry form. You brought life to words. Well done and congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/29/2013 6:35:00 PM
Congrad's on your fine verse winning! Light & Love
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Joseph May
Date: 7/30/2013 12:58:00 PM
thank you Debbie
Date: 12/11/2012 3:58:00 PM
My friend, I am most impressed. Before today I would have thought terzanelle referred to some gypsy-like Italian dance. I must confess that after reading your work I have an almost irresistable urge to lay down my pen. Now I must say that to surpass your talent level is no longer a goal.... I can only hope to remain within your shadow. Terrific entry... Jake
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Date: 12/11/2012 3:34:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Happy hoildays. Light & Love
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Date: 12/10/2012 3:52:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations with your awesome win in the "A Flame Once Burned " contest... always~PD
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Date: 12/10/2012 3:24:00 PM
Wonderful and excellent write,Joseph...lovely piece....Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph....Seren
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:38:00 AM
Big congratulations once again Joseph, awesome write xx
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Date: 12/4/2012 1:23:00 AM
superb write my friend Joseph. Good luck in the contest..thanks for dropping by on my poem...hugs :)
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Date: 11/30/2012 12:30:00 PM
great write Joseph
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Date: 11/29/2012 1:46:00 PM
Mr. May, I am a fan... love your way of writing... Michael
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Joseph May
Date: 11/29/2012 4:19:00 PM
thanks for those kind words Michael...
Date: 11/29/2012 12:07:00 PM
Great work..I am not familar with this form..I will have to look it up..Thanks for the congrats...Good luck in the contest of course you won't need luck with this one which is a sure winner..Sara
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Joseph May
Date: 11/29/2012 4:18:00 PM
thanks Sara ...,it is similar to villanelle
Date: 11/28/2012 11:35:00 PM
Hi, again . I don't think there is a recent post of yours for me to see, but thanks for your comments to me today.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/29/2012 4:17:00 PM
thanks Andrea
Date: 11/28/2012 2:48:00 PM
wow, how ambitious of you, doing it in such a difficult form. But you pulled it off and very well. Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/28/2012 4:37:00 PM
thank you Andrea...I appreciate your comments

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