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A-Minor

we passed each other in the night we each felt the shudder The silence filled with words and hopes... we killed the hope with blunders it seemed so simple to ask you to go ... janetta

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Date: 11/30/2008 6:10:00 AM
Janetta - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:45:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2008 4:54:00 AM
Janetta - still so very deep - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/30/2008 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2008 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Janetta. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2008 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations Janetta, on "A-MINOR" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 7/28/2008 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations Janetta on this most interesting poem being featured this week. Thought provoking. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/27/2008 6:14:00 PM
There is so much said on your relationship in this poem - congrats on the feature
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Date: 7/27/2008 5:40:00 PM
The short lines work well in this one. Much to think about here. Congratulations on having you poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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