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see you as an idol with sadness of my eye, see you as a mistake where devil lie inside, see you down to history with regret and lie, see you in wall where you hide, may shoot you with my words,kill you with my eyes, you wanna be the prime ,sorry not this time, force a laugh,and dance and play the part punish you,leaving you as you are giving you up,forgiven it all I looked down to you,coz i need your all

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Moon Flower

Date: 5/27/2016 1:40:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Ankit. :)

Ankit Vaidya
Date: 5/27/2016 4:24:00 AM

Thanks a lot for you warm welcome, looking forward to enjoy this world Poetrysoup. again thanks :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2016 10:39:00 PM

Ankit,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Ankit Vaidya
Date: 5/27/2016 4:38:00 AM

Hi i am Ankit vaidya from Nepal, i am 17 and just had though of writing and started,love seeing people like you encouraging me, Thanks a lot for your warm welcome, i am open for all your advice, hope to improve myself. had check your poems, like the way wrote the poem Rose. :) thanks again.

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2016 6:13:00 PM

Ankit, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* NR--- SKAT

Ankit Vaidya
Date: 5/27/2016 4:43:00 AM

Hi i am Ankit vaidya from Nepal, i am 17 and just had though of writing and started,love seeing people like you encouraging me, Thanks a lot for your warm welcome, looking forward to enjoy this world Poetrysoup. had check your poems, its great,and you got a new followers thanks again.