Yellow Swallowtail Flashes

. Flashes of yellow Trimmed in black floats, rest, flies, rest.... Yellow Lantana

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Date: 9/6/2010 7:35:00 AM

beautifully written, enjoyed. Harry

Date: 9/4/2010 2:44:00 PM

your color descriptions in this haiku has a very soft feeling to the imagination...nice,jay

Date: 9/4/2010 10:02:00 AM

A wonderful poem ,Sara. a nice view of imagination, enjoyed,..p.d.

Date: 9/4/2010 9:56:00 AM

HAVE YOU PUBLISHED ANY ANTHOLOGY YET? I AM WORKING ON ONE AND NEED SOME ADVISES ANYWAY UR POEMS ARE JUST MARVELOUS

Date: 9/4/2010 8:25:00 AM

Beautiful images in your haiku Sara, hope you having an awesome weekend, love Wilma

Date: 9/4/2010 8:14:00 AM

Enjoyed the haiku with nice images, sara

Date: 9/4/2010 8:14:00 AM

Thanks for commenting on my poetry, gosh you have painted a lovely picture with words, so visual, well done~~ love Constance

Date: 9/4/2010 7:46:00 AM

Mm, this would be a scene to view Sara. Have a wonderful weekend. Thank you for your always kind comments >> James

Date: 9/4/2010 7:05:00 AM

Nice Picture!!!! lovely Haiku....luv Michael