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With the Eye As a Target

A hunting riffle And a yell… On the blue shade of silence Scratches: Flashes light in the horizon The quietness… Worms spin the fortune wheel; Interfere with mermaids’ songs- Pierced by the arrow The sunset is blocked Between the eyelashes. (translated by Laura Bogdan )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/13/2013 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. I am happy that my poems have resonance.
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Date: 11/12/2013 3:11:00 PM
I love how you shape words to tell a story, You have me on the edge of my seat reveling in the strength and courage of your convictions.
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