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A woman’s core lies hidden in the seed of a bud-- the key to her heart, found deep inside: while a male chases that perfume so sweet , he needs to explore her mystique, untold. Poetic language, oh, she will ignore, for to court a maiden fair, the test is arduous… remember, sugared words flit like a wind . ~ How to conquer her soul, her eternal value, a man must bear this bud’s many thorns, and discover the sparkling rose within… like so, unlock her charmed passion gently not through rare jewels or over- adulation. ~ What she needs is the rarest dream of all, this key to her affection is only one, not three: all she desires from a man is to love her, and continue to love her well incessantly until end of twilight hours are fully done. ~ Three Keys Contest Posted 7/17/2016

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Date: 7/23/2016 5:07:00 AM
Congrats Nette, for your WIN with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/22/2016 2:59:00 PM
Well done congrats great poem xx
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Date: 7/21/2016 12:20:00 PM
Yes just one key is enough for a woman,beautiful poem Nette!
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:15:00 AM
Great write Nette! I must say this is one of your best! Congratulations and continue using the power of your words! :)
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Date: 7/20/2016 6:48:00 PM
beautifully penned Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/20/2016 5:52:00 PM
So very lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your placement in the 'three keys' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/20/2016 2:04:00 PM
...and one must wait patiently and future the awakening and opening of each rose. Beautifully written Nette. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 7/17/2016 10:35:00 AM
How inspiring is this brilliant poem. Love is surely the one key that a woman desires ever.
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Date: 7/16/2016 7:01:00 PM
Nette, oh you have such a beautiful style of writing, it is really quite breathless, and I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 7/16/2016 5:52:00 PM
Beautiful write Nette...a winner for me...good luck and god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/16/2016 4:49:00 PM
I like what you did with this and I love the poem! :)
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Date: 7/16/2016 4:15:00 PM
Original is this poem. Could be 3 keys in one---love her, continue to love her, love till end of time. Fantastic,I want this dream too!
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Date: 7/16/2016 4:06:00 PM
I like how you turned this into something extraordinary. theme-wise. Am amazing poem that gets an upgrade for reminding me to love well!
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