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True Blue

as gentle as a summer breeze my love it begs you on it's knees as soft as fur on those that purr i whisper in your ear sweet words as sweet as berries on your tongue inside your heart a bell is rung as sure as change is bound to come an undying love my heart is won as loud as thunder my heart wonders can your love be really true as vain as pain which i have gained my worries about what she'd do as wrong as sin not trusting begins and rumors start flying from mouths of friends as soon as one cracks with a terrible act then ferocity and raging comes in as you are standing on the side of me no distance is aware of my resistance as heart forgets its rhythm, my sighs do long to touch emotions prevail this longing unravels my senses as to, dare i say, how much a single touch awakens me? a love so pure as this I have not known as i trust your arms to teach me of this love i no longer hear the gossip or the whispers as you take my breath away on winds of change a true blue sky above the color of our love as it casts a light into your eyes and anchor mine if this be sin then let me cast away my stone as for my soul it is willing to pay the highest price god has cast a dye our love is not to be denied come lover hold me tight, long into the night. Written by: Vienna Bombardieri & John H. Loving III Dec. 04, 2011

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Date: 2/7/2012 4:26:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this poem John. Perfectly done. -Halie lol
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Date: 1/11/2012 3:32:00 PM
what a blend of superb poetry, by two superbv poets. harry
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Date: 1/10/2012 3:16:00 PM
hello remember me.Hope all is well with you.I posted a write called LOST AND LONELY.read it and you will know how I am doing. TAKE CARE COLLEEN BONO
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Date: 1/10/2012 3:06:00 PM
Sweet and romantic John...lovely.oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/9/2012 2:09:00 PM
trust and mistrust...some inspired writing going on here, liked the internal rhyme...good luck in your contest too...
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:25:00 PM
A fine collaboration my friends. Very nicely done. Loved it too. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/6/2012 11:01:00 PM
ELEGANT LINES OF BEAUTY.. GREAT COLLAB.. GOOD LUCK IN CONTEST.. THANKXX FOR SWEET WORDS AND SENTIMENTS AND PRAYERS LUV..
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:11:00 PM
i'm in love with this one. what do you think Vie?
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Date: 1/5/2012 2:47:00 PM
Lovely stuff, of course I preffered the first half to the second, but the second is also life unfortunately...May you both live the first verse always! Hugs lizzie
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Date: 1/5/2012 2:22:00 PM
This is lovely... Really enjoyed.. Nice flow, like Derrick said. Take care!
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Date: 1/5/2012 2:12:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this it flowed nicely. Been a while since I read some of your stuff. Happy new year! :)
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Date: 1/5/2012 1:51:00 PM
Yesw indeed. One is always protective of one's loved ones. Nicely said. God Bless, JB As for my poem on Mr. Perfect, It's Satire. Satire is used as comical derision to expose or denounce vice or folly. It isn't easy to live with someone who is constantly correcting you or pointing out your faults. This is what I was pointing out. Most of my poems have a message. God Bless my friend, JB
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Date: 1/4/2012 8:43:00 PM
Sounds like the changing face of Spring one moment full of love next full of cloudy noisy bursts, All the best, bren
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Date: 1/4/2012 5:42:00 PM
Just a great start John; romantic with that special touch that holds the reader. When do we get to read the rest?
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Date: 1/4/2012 4:34:00 PM
wow..this write is so deep... its rhythm takes u through with much simplicity yet so romantic.. wonderful.. im sure much can relate to this poem.. thanks for sharing.. love Maryam*
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:04:00 PM
Very romantic..Enjoyed reading..I am sure Vie will do a great job writing the next part..Yes, I was thinking of lying down next to the creek in the Bamboo and sleeping..Ha!Ha!..No, I got some Bamboo pajamas..Sara..Thanks for the kind review..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/4/2012 3:05:00 PM
Well actually I had had the pj's a long time and just decided to wear them and they were so nice..Sara

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