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Tranquility

~Tranquility~ Cozy and hot outside! Two symbols of these worlds collide Eluding eclipse effect and becomes worldwide, Sinking every lover's heart from the inside Unhappy endings, one massive clutch-less ride Emotions fly, like a veggie glide. Under this new moon and sun's high tide. God, must have a new evil plan set aside! :)

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Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 11:02:00 PM

i feel like a pill lol **SKAT**

Robin Davis

Date: 5/21/2014 9:52:00 PM

PD This is a strongly written poem with a lot of deep meaning. Very intense and powerful. Thank you for the great comment on my Butterfly poem.

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/1/2013 8:40:00 AM

sometimes I think GOD has some evil plans to see how strong we really are.good day to you.take care

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/8/2012 9:55:00 PM

Marvelous mono-rhyming! I love '...one massive clutch-less ride,' and '...a veggie glide.' Reall well done, PD!! Best wishes, Keith

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/27/2012 7:51:00 AM

hi PD.. is this for my contest?.. thanks!.. i was asking for a new poem with the main title " selene" on it... a radiant piece---maybe we can do something like tweak it or send something fresh from the oven?... looking forward with thrills from you!... got only 3 entries before the game closes; hurry!..:) hugs and love!

James Fraser

Date: 7/21/2011 1:34:00 PM

The Sea of Tranquillity graced by the sun as it's eclipsed. Fine poetry pd :)

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/5/2011 6:04:00 PM

You know, my P.d., at some point you simply must try rhyme and do a sonnet or a quatrain because I KNOW that you would be quite good at it and you would surprise yourself. You would NOT shock me, because reading things like this makes me KNOW that you can achieve fine things in that style. Regards, Gerard.

Audonus Taylor

Date: 6/4/2011 6:42:00 PM

Long time no comment. Sorry for my absence from the soup. I have returned for the most part. My first read since I have been back and Wow, you never disappoint me. I just feel that I will alway adore your writing. Great Work. On to the next piece.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/3/2011 2:45:00 PM

knew it would be just a matter of time before the 'haters' attacked but u continue to run the contests fast and furious my BFF PD... see my blog comment to u... some exitement down here at seashore today.. sadly an 11 year old girl fell from top of ferris wheel and was instantly killed on a school trip..so getting to my commenting late in the day .. the police closed the pier where it happened .. so tragic luv.. keep up the good flow .. your BFF forever.

Dennis Bishop

Date: 6/2/2011 5:36:00 PM

wonderful poem P.D as always :)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/1/2011 7:58:00 AM

Did you talking about Eclipse from twilight thingy??? Just a thought P.D. :) This is entertaining though.. xo

Royal Trevino

Date: 6/1/2011 7:36:00 AM

I miss you P.D., love Royal =(^.^)=

Busaba Patanawiroj

Date: 5/31/2011 4:19:00 AM

good job

Eddie Merritt

Date: 5/30/2011 3:11:00 PM

Good shyt

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 5/30/2011 8:58:00 AM

Veggie glide' lmfao 'S'

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/29/2011 11:02:00 PM

Check out this song--Never Alone by Barlow Girl I just love the lyrics for where I have been recently in my life! It is so poetic! Hugs, girl! Gwendolen

James Foulk

Date: 5/29/2011 8:54:00 PM

thank you P.D. for commenting on Breezes on the Lake.

Autumn Ehrhardt

Date: 5/29/2011 8:24:00 PM

Interesting, but I also question the veggie glide. the power of an eclipse is intense.

Dalila Agtani

Date: 5/29/2011 11:53:00 AM

P. D. You made me think on this poem, underneath the line is tranquility despite of unhappy endings?? Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for following mine too. Dalila

Don Johnson

Date: 5/28/2011 9:45:00 PM

Yes Destroyer;P.D Returned , re saw the tortured more, as lovers heart's subside, me clutch it slips, the boofhead bitch, i don't want suicide:) thanks babe...xo...Don

De R

Date: 5/28/2011 10:32:00 AM

Great monorhyme, PD! But what does 'veggie glide' stand for? Didn't quite understand...But good poem! Hugs, Emilia