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Sweet Illusion

The morning falls from wings of day beaming light in the fields of hay and thine smile is now in sight passions do rise through its heights. as river runs in the silent brook so my sentiment in madness soak and the moonlit on the bay shines brightly to close the day. swift as the speed of light is the sentiment on it's might and the beaming spark of passion reminding me the sweet illusion the whispering of Zephyrus wind reality to me it sends and the curtain of ebony engulf my emotion's tragedy. as the howling calls of time the sentient of mine sublime in the bivouac field of life within the windshield of the the strife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2016 4:26:00 PM
Again, thank you for the nice reply... Stephany.... Linda
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 3/30/2016 11:55:00 PM
Its my great pleasure ... thank you too Linda.... hugs stef
Date: 3/21/2016 10:18:00 PM
STEPHANY DELIMA,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 3/25/2016 8:00:00 AM
thank you so much.. ill do keep on sharing... STEF
Date: 1/15/2016 9:08:00 PM
Stephany, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Ruth Wrights
Date: 1/16/2016 6:43:00 AM
thank you skat.... *stef*

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