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Unnerving silence filled the air a gloom settling and deepening with almost complete darkness. Storm crept within tightly packed and a bite becoming irritated through an angry filled breath with a vicious voice eased back white, yellow, orange lighting. Fiery blooms, rough quite a sight to see so high in the sky continuously changing. Orange fire and flickering light reflecting upon the valley once, twice a wrenching feel escorting wet droplets of rain. Silence was interrupted seconds later with ardent fury; lighting once more shaking everything through and through. Horrific freezing rage and bright lights danced while the lion filled the air with anger. Thunder rolled across the sky, it couldn't stop opening the stage once more fueled by adrenaline. The Thunderbolts were out-of-control of pure terror plummeting connecting and sinking into the soaked soil. A surprisingly calm came over and soothed the storm within moving on with a view off the top of the fringe trees and blue sky beyond. 2/17/2018

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Date: 2/19/2018 2:08:00 AM
That is very powerful. Kai
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Date: 2/18/2018 2:37:00 PM
Very lovely, Eve; your descriptive powers come to the fore, appealing to our senses! Regards & hugs // paul
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:53:00 PM
You've done a great job describing this scary storm
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Date: 2/18/2018 7:33:00 AM
You described it very poetically Eve... GL in the contest..
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Date: 2/18/2018 1:14:00 AM
Well interpreted, Eve, a fine piece. Can I come out from under the table now? Viv x
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:26:00 AM
Gorgeous ... Resounding ... Enjoyed reading the poem, Eve ...
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Date: 2/17/2018 9:50:00 PM
Wonderful, Eve. Couldn't help but imagine you around the campfire telling tales and scaring the heck out of little kids and big kids alike. Well done.
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/17/2018 10:20:00 PM
Thank you, Line...I did spend a few times around the campfire , but I heard the kids and my husband telling the tales...

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