STAR

A legend from a distant time Candescent, mesmeric, ephemeral, sublime And yet I see that light today You have my heart you show the way... ...LOVE. .... ONLY LOVE. .......ALWAYS LOVE.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/8/2016 1:31:00 PM

I like the short to the point in this one..I feel like it is about your love..Thanks for stopping by..SARA

P Sheart

Date: 9/14/2009 5:07:00 PM

Hi Louis Beautifully written! I enjoyed your sentiments in this and the ryhme goes perfectly with your well crafted words. Thanks for sharing this with us. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Louis Spence
Date: 5/28/2011 8:55:00 AM

Many many thanks for your kind comments, Patricia. Louis.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/14/2009 5:32:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Louis. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol