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Snow Flake and Leaf Adventure - Haiku

Snow Flake And Leaf Adventure - Haiku Snow flake lands on leaf Both fall to river raging Spin past rocks, dizzy

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/3/2014 6:22:00 AM

Lovely haiku Earl ! I can relate to this great work of yours!

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/3/2014 8:33:00 AM

Hi Dr. Sharma, Thank you for your interest and kind words. I appreciate it. Take care. Earl

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/2/2014 8:14:00 PM

I spend some time each year near a swift flowing creek, have seen this and it does make you kind of dizzy..wonderful poem. BG

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/3/2014 8:36:00 AM

Hi Barbara, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It is one of those wonders of nature worth reflecting on. Take care. Earl

David Meade

Date: 11/2/2014 7:53:00 PM

The fleeting life of snow flake and leaf -- I felt the speed of the haiku -- great poem.

Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/3/2014 8:39:00 AM

Hi David, Thank you so much for your kind words and interest. It is good that nature can carry us away sometimes to a better place. Have a great day. Earl