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Sirens Chorale

What if I told you Deep in the abyss Was a watery haven where mermaids exist Guarding treasures of pirates consumed by the sea Residing in shipwrecks among the debris Maybe you have heard their harmonic chorale Through ocean’s Secret aquatic canals A Spellbinding symphony A treat for the ears But be well prepared it will move you to tears So next time you’re feeling the call of sea Just know that the sirens are singing for thee

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Date: 5/25/2020 7:45:00 AM
Such a delicate poem from a kingdom deep down the sea. Lovely!
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Date: 12/12/2019 12:15:00 PM
Spooky love tale, so scary good, El! Your ink style is beautiful Ariel. As is this delightful poem. Love and best wishes for the holiday.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/12/2019 12:18:00 PM
Btw ... I wrote a tribute poem, "Electric Coma" that was inspired by your visionary poem, "Robot Revolution." I posted it on 11/19. Love and more love always.
Date: 10/28/2019 5:15:00 AM
This has the perfect flow to it! It read in a sing song beat beautiful wow!;)
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 11/13/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thank you lovely :-) x
Date: 10/4/2019 11:10:00 PM
I will be wary of the Siren call. Great imagery.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/6/2019 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Richard :-) x
Date: 10/2/2019 5:11:00 AM
Enchanting to say the least...you've got the magic in your ink...Nice one
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/2/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely words Arturo :-) x
Date: 10/1/2019 3:54:00 PM
This is one of my favs of the contest Elaine...wonderful imagery. Congrats.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/2/2019 3:42:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed it :-) Thank you Jeanne x
Date: 9/30/2019 9:24:00 PM
You’ve spun a compelling little tale with smooth and apt rhyme and rhythm. I enjoyed it very much.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/2/2019 3:41:00 AM
Thanks so much Mark :-) x
Date: 9/29/2019 4:46:00 PM
Such beautiful tone and flow to your poem..enjoyed this lovely write, Elaine.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :-) x
Date: 9/29/2019 12:11:00 PM
Nicely executed my friend...and welcome to PoetrySoup...happy writing Elaine...^WW^ :o)
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 4:52:00 PM
Thank you :-) x
Date: 9/29/2019 11:21:00 AM
Elaine, I just saw that you are the number one top new poet of the last month, A big congrats my friend!!! John
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 11:47:00 AM
Wow! Thanks I didn’t know that :-) x
Date: 9/29/2019 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful verse Elaine, you should enter the mermaids contest if you haven't already. Tom.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 11:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Tom :-) Yes I have entered x
Date: 9/29/2019 7:02:00 AM
Those sirens of the deep are mesmerizing with their beauty and their song. Best of luck in the contest, Elaine. Join
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 11:45:00 AM
Thank you John :-) x
Date: 9/29/2019 5:14:00 AM
Nice poem, how beautiful you make it sound..
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/29/2019 5:43:00 AM
Thank you Silent one :-) x

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