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Share My Love

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Come and share my love,
I’ll give you all of me
Offer everything I am
Give it graciously

Come and share my love
I want to lose myself
Surrender everything I own
Until I have nothing left

Come and share my love
Let’s lay the night away
As I wrap my warmth around you
Until dawn, turns to day


Come and share my love
Like you’ve been yearning to do
Your every wish is my command
I will submit to you


Chiquita Chiamaka Baity

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/18/2011 1:29:00 AM
i like how you put the title of the poem in every starting sentence. that was dope. i loved it reading it.
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Date: 8/16/2011 12:06:00 PM
really sensuous..........lovely write....
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Date: 8/7/2011 10:37:00 PM
Risky, Risky,Risky but commendable.... I love it when a good love happen's and it doe's have it's place. But remember that love is personal and your's to feel what you like even if it dosen't pan out. Even if he is a jerk, do not let him tak your love away, it's your's..... Let this be a lesson to ya! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:30:00 PM
Some Risk are worth taking...lol
Date: 8/6/2011 1:37:00 AM
WOW!! That's what every man longs to hear. You sure do know how to raise an interest. Your lips breed intoxicating words cultivated from a fertile mind that is littered with sensuality. It was certainly a pleasure to read. WHEW!! Thanks again. Rockman :-)
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Date: 8/5/2011 2:37:00 PM
when there is true love, there is true relaxation of mind... i wish you the best baby, in your-love life.
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Date: 8/5/2011 7:52:00 AM
Chiquita, yet another poetic delight dear poet ! Yet, about your form listed; never use the form; "I do not know", just my suggestion Chiquita. My suggestion is, to use the form; 'Free Verse', or, 'Romanticisim'. Look them up on, 'Forms of poetry' on the left of your window here. Oh, I for sure am enjoying your poetic talent ! Until later ! Much love, james
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Date: 8/5/2011 2:19:00 AM
I love the poem! Completes the story, wonderfully crafted!
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Date: 8/5/2011 12:01:00 AM
Sounds like a great way to go ( if you have the strength)!
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:46:00 PM
WOW, another sizzler yikes!
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