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Midnight in droplet puddles murky cobble stone after a crisp whiz of rain, men sound left alone. Portal kept silence into a magical dew of faint world's absence. 9/14/2017 Contest: 'SEGUIDILLA' Contest Sponsored By: nette onclaud 1. Midnight, not a sound from the pavement. Verify syl count www.howmanysyllables.com

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/22/2017 7:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win with this lovely write:)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/22/2017 12:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2017 7:27:00 PM

It seems that everyone so far I've read who did that picture came up with some marvelous imagery. Way to go, Eve!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/21/2017 4:43:00 PM

Congrats Eve on your second place win!

Constance La France

Date: 9/21/2017 3:03:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful write !!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/21/2017 2:57:00 PM

Congratulations Eve! :)

Gary Smith

Date: 9/21/2017 2:27:00 PM

Congrats Eve :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/21/2017 2:05:00 PM

Congrats Eve!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2017 1:40:00 PM

eve, you raised the bar with this astounding seguidilla---atmospheric and right down my alley!... best congrats as i thank you for participating... huggs

Maria Williams

Date: 9/16/2017 7:13:00 AM

A nice midnight scene, loved the line 'murky cobble stone'. Good luck in the contest Eve...Maria

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/15/2017 12:36:00 PM

Enjoyed the rhythm in the poem, wonderful choice of words and lovely imagery, Eve ... Good Night ...

Pipping Stars

Date: 9/15/2017 9:57:00 AM

very tricky ... we really enjoy this type of read ... leaves the mind searching endless riddles ... ... "men sound" "left alone" "portal kept silent" ... whisper ing merely assumed... street lamp lights in a hollow pool... cobblestone drawn mosture marooned... drown ing in breaths breathed by fools... centering lines on golden spools... marking shadows... as fiery fuels ...?... your words n pic inspire ... huh ...

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2017 12:20:00 PM

Thank you, Timothy, you are a breath of fresh air :)

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2017 8:55:00 AM

Nice imagery and use of words...

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2017 12:21:00 PM

Thank you ,silent one, Hugs Eve ~ `*

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/15/2017 6:26:00 AM

Lovely depiction of silent pavement and the quiet of the midnight--best wishes for a win, Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2017 12:22:00 PM

Thank you ,Vijay, r, Hugs Eve ~ `*

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/15/2017 4:17:00 AM

Wow Eve, this is spectacular, a grandiose write my friend! I definitely enjoyed reading your masterful poem this morning, you have delighted me by your wondrous skill at writing this rare form! I enjoyed writing this form, how about you? What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2017 12:23:00 PM

Thank you , Russell, love your inspirational compliment you are so kind. Hugs Eve ~ `*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2017 2:07:00 AM

- Lovely written, Eve :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2017 12:24:00 PM

Thank you , Sunshine, . Hugs Eve ~ `*