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A Sad Christmas

She wakens from a dream. The phone just rang! The dream about her kids now flees her head. They’re gone - her nest of children! And that bird who’d built a nest with her has snuck from bed. She treads the hall, then hears his lowered voice. He’s saying, “Dear, I’m sorry we’re apart.” She knows the time has come to make the choice- to stay or go. . . and faster pounds her heart. She takes two bags she’d packed two weeks ago and places underneath the tree a note, the one she wrote the day there came first snow of winter when she’d run without a coat and screamed into a night that streamed white tears. A plane awaits; she leaves her shackling fears. Dec. 8, 2018 for Dear Heart's A Sad Christmas - December 2018 Writing Challenge - Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/3/2019 12:52:00 AM
So happy to see this a top winner Andrea. I thought it was poignant and so relatable. Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/17/2018 3:01:00 AM
- Many factors can make Christmas an extra heavy time - Congratulations on your winning poem, Andrea :) - Merry Christmas to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2018 5:52:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, what a great ending, hurray for her !!! Well done ~
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Date: 12/14/2018 7:34:00 PM
GOOSE-BUMP drama that I absolutely inhaled in excitement. For this I clap and praise you. ew la la Love ... CayCay
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Date: 12/10/2018 6:37:00 PM
Much emotion...such sadness!
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Date: 12/9/2018 4:58:00 PM
Its sad alright, but i still love the poetry...
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Date: 12/9/2018 8:26:00 AM
A sad sonnet, you expressed it well for the contest..
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Date: 12/9/2018 8:06:00 AM
Your able pen never disappoints..I felt the sadness and her predicament. Well written, as always, Andrea.
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Date: 12/9/2018 2:55:00 AM
A well written sad verse Andrea, sadly somewhere this will happen to them. Families torn apart. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 12/9/2018 1:16:00 AM
Excellent write but very sad. Hopefully everyone will have lovely Christmas season this time. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/8/2018 9:13:00 PM
This is, indeed, very sad, Andrea. And it's something that happens often. Couples fall out of love and we sometimes regret the decisions we make in the middle of the night. Beautifully written, my friend. The reader develops feelings for the woman right away as she "loses" the dream of a nest full of children. Dear Heart will love this one, my friend. Sending hugs to you, Carolyn
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Date: 12/8/2018 8:13:00 PM
indeed very sad! I hope everyone has a happy Christmas this year!!! :)
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