Rhymes with You - Footles

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Rhymes with You - Footles

Sad Sheep
Blue
Ewe

Honest Indian
True
Sioux

Line at Church
Pew
Queue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 10/17/2014 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Timothy: I was determined but glad you saw the humor in them.
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Date: 10/17/2014 10:57:00 AM
I've never attempted footles before, but these are mighty clever. Suzanne Delaney Real Deal ;)
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Date: 10/17/2014 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Timothy: I was determined so am glad you saw the humor in them.
Date: 8/29/2014 11:32:00 AM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats!!! Sara
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:11:00 AM
Very clever write - excellent piece that I enjoyed reading! Congratulation on the win! Pandita
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:05:00 AM
Am so glad Andrea gave you and HM for these:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:04:00 AM
- Back to say: - Congratulations with your win Suz ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2014 1:14:00 AM
oh, Suz, I wish I had known you were trying these so I could have told you, they need to be two syllables in each line to be considered footles. but because they were so good, I still wanted them on my list. I like how you tied them together saying "rhymes with you" a good way to make random become a set!!
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Date: 8/21/2014 2:57:00 AM
- Suz, yes fun to try .... I like your footle, well done! - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/20/2014 5:41:00 AM
Hi Suzanne! You are still in time to 'save' your lovely writes:) pls see soupmail. // paul
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Date: 8/20/2014 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Paul
Date: 8/20/2014 2:19:00 AM
Lovely, my dear...You can still edit it if it is entered into the contest. From your contest entries link! These footless are awesome! Loved them. Andrea will too! :)
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Date: 8/20/2014 2:24:00 AM
Thanks Eileen . So nice of you to visit. . Hugs, Suz
Date: 8/19/2014 10:29:00 PM
Good! The last one wont work..syllable count is wrong..but like the rest! BG
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Date: 8/19/2014 11:00:00 PM
Barbara...was about to take it off and had a brain storm...what do you think?
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Date: 8/19/2014 10:55:00 PM
Thanks Barbara: No one likes leftovers lol I already entered it so too late to remove the offending one. This contest filled up fast.