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Phantom Slippers of Thoughts

Without soul nourishment our spirits shall wither and die. Words are a mere instrument, but can reflect truth to power. Of our faith within love and understanding—truth begs mercy, Whilst melting honey-sweet crystals kiss thy soft warm cheeks. We dream and bathe inside the sun’s most radiant gift of desire. Cool waters of divine creation lovingly quench this desert fire, And the haunting spectre of death shall never be an end to us! Winds of such deep-thoughts softly and sweetly sting at once, When I show you a mirror-image of what our destiny can be. Adrift in storms of fervid emotions I give in now to your love. I see a temple of beauty I once bowed down to under your gaze, As your red-hot daggers strike deepest cords in this coldest breeze. Now holding hands sunlight-sparkled with you inside this dream, This heartfelt satisfaction’s worth more than all the world’s gold! Riches fall from Heaven now in shining jewels of misted pearls, Whilst I walk alone in deepest thoughts in my blue suede shoes. Living-loving inside a sole-soul of dreams—true and unbounded, I hear songbirds whistle and whisper in such joy by God’s grace. Our souls may nourish themselves on the eternal power of our love. With God as our witness—we fear not what death shall bring to us, For our love and true destiny exist far beyond this mortal world! Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, A Collaborated Poem Copyright © All Rights Reserved – May 15, 2016 (Free Verse)

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Date: 5/19/2016 3:27:00 AM
Excellent quality of words
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Date: 5/19/2016 1:01:00 AM
This is a stupendous write by exceptionally talented poets ! My fav lines~haunting spectre of death~ ~storms of fervid emotions ~temple of beauty~shining jewels of misted pearls~blue suede shoes~ exceptionally great lines ,creating vivid images....A highly applaudable piece of work ~REd~
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Date: 5/17/2016 3:12:00 PM
Liam Mate!! Thanks for posting this one first. (I will follow suit next week when I post it in turn.) This one did turn out very well theme-wise as we had intended. I'm always pleased when we both have the opportunity to put our heads together on certain topics of mutual interest. I really liked the final result with this one!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/17/2016 1:36:00 PM
- Dear Liam and Gary, this poem is "a temple of beauty" ! - Really beautiful written, with deep understanding of life and death in love - It will forever be in "my collection" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/17/2016 3:15:00 PM
Thanks Dear Anne-Lise!! I'm sure Liam will be replying here soon too. (We both put some time in on this one!!) Thanks for including it in your special collection!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. I'm still working too on prose writes.)
Date: 5/17/2016 1:10:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Gary!:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/17/2016 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Dear One "D"!! And thanks for the TR/FAV. I'm sure Liam will reply later. (I will actually be re-posting this one next week since Liam and I tag-team our co-writes for maximum exposure in the Soup.) Thanks too (as always) for your really great and observant comments. (I will actually be working again on my prose writes--as I must--for my second book for next year. But I will still be actively posting poetry as I can.) Talk to you again soon -- and best wishes too from Ingrid and me!! "G"

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