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not the SOUP

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not the SOUP

    ~hanging on~

I wake, bright and early like the sun
I fall asleep a few seconds before dawn.

With a few hours of sleep
I found myself counting sheep.

Drinking  coffee before I leave
Found myself in a zone not even I believe

I kick the neighbors  dog real far
Tired of him barking before I get into my car

Turn my radio on real loud
Enjoying music loud and proud

I never late
I'm responsible in this job I hate

The owner taps the door and found me asleep
Up in my face like a creep.

He tells me I am lucky he can not work alone.
Why I insist of not waking him before I leave our home?

I bet he wishes he could fire me
I will not agree

As soon as I log out of the Poetry Soup I tell him when I'm done. 
When he goes to bed I still find myself roaming the Internet for fun :)

With a goodnight kiss, he asked, if I could give him some
I say just one more comment hun,  I'm  almost done

By 4:00 am I am still on the Soup.
He wakes up to the same situation
Yells at me, he grabs my laptop and then he........


                     S.K.A.T. POETRY
                         4-21-10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 10/16/2015 9:15:00 AM
Definitely left us hanging!
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Date: 6/3/2015 6:57:00 AM
Very funny write Skat...I love "just one more comment hun" ....enjoyed
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Date: 10/18/2013 11:50:00 PM
Irma This is a cute and creative write. You pulled the reader in right till the end with humor and fun. The soup is addictive and any poet on here can relate to this. Hugs
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Date: 7/19/2013 1:18:00 AM
I see this one was for Gareth's contest. Whatever happened to that guy?? Thanks for the CONGRAT, SKAT. don't you love the rhyme!!
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Date: 7/7/2013 12:28:00 AM
no!
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Date: 6/19/2013 3:05:00 PM
hey, wasn't this a poem for a contest that never was judged? I still remember because it was called "Leave me haning" and that is exactly what the guy did to us with his contest!! (thanks for my win, Skat)
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Date: 12/21/2010 12:56:00 PM
are you sure its not the soup..? ha ha. and how big was this dog..SKAT?
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Date: 10/24/2010 2:31:00 PM
Cool I like the kicking the nieghbor's dog. I write all my poems in the early hours of the morning and sleep by day. Naughty but that's work that dictates me hours
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:12:00 AM
fun with words!
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:01:00 PM
Irma, do you remember THIS contest. Gosh, I was dying to know how everyone ended their story poems and GArth has VANISHED from the site!! thanks for your comment. I always feel guilty when I talk to you since I didn't enter your contest. I just can't think what i would say for it. But I want it to be successful for you and I have not even come across any of the entries for it yet. You are such a sweetheart. Luv, Andrea ps did you see Linda's latest contest. It;s one you could really do well in!
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:19:00 PM
very very funny, I got a good laugh, and that my friend is worth its weight in gold. good job, keep up the good work, If you want you can e-mail me at thesons2@gmail.com
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Date: 5/5/2010 5:45:00 AM
interesting write here, really enjoyed it alot. and have a great day.:)
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Date: 5/4/2010 1:08:00 PM
Well ya left me hangin. That write was bangin. Your Kiddy-Poo, only 4 U.
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:22:00 AM
uh-oh!! wonder what happens next next!! looking forward to know what happened, Irma :) nice write!
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:20:00 PM
lol. Nicely written. So honest. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/29/2010 1:24:00 PM
Cool write, Irma...Enjoyed reading it...thanks for the laughter..it's been a hectic day...Audrey
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Date: 4/28/2010 11:51:00 PM
Like the irony here Irma.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/28/2010 3:19:00 PM
Haha i like this alot. nice one...eh the onlyyyy thing i dont like is it reminds me of how my mom always said a few more mins when she was on the computer and it turned into, well forever. but yeah the poem rocks.
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:28:00 AM
You kick the dog sis.. noone said nothing bout it either.. u didnt kick him hard, its a him right? Enjoyed this poem, it rymed perfectly and I got to put it the favs...Have a great morning.:)
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Date: 4/28/2010 3:52:00 AM
Okay Irma you got me hanging on for sure. I think this is winner material. Thank you so much for your always kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:34:00 PM
Wow...this peom makes me laugh,,,this reminds me of Jim Carey,,,great!
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Date: 4/27/2010 4:48:00 PM
haha great poem, Irma!
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Date: 4/27/2010 9:30:00 AM
Someone got mad,(Baby boy0
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:28:00 AM
good hanger---
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Date: 4/26/2010 3:39:00 PM
this is amazing. i love it. also,, i wanna know how it ends!! lol (: great write
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