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*Locks of white spumes droops on rug of emerald moss-- Blanket of cold rocks *Lock-- tress of hair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/21/2009 2:13:00 PM
very unque take! Light & Love
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Date: 10/27/2009 1:29:00 PM
I like how everybody got a different interpretation out of this picture. Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 10/24/2009 7:58:00 PM
Dear Ismael, Congratulations on your placing in Raul's Contest well deserved Honor YOUR POETIC Talent is inspiring ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 10/23/2009 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations, Ismael, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this absolutely stunning haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 10/21/2009 8:52:00 AM
Oh, I Love The Vivid Contrast of Imagery in this Haiku ! ... (I Love Snow) And the Description of Nature as A Woman with cold and uncombed hair is so unique... Excellent MoonBee
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:16:00 AM
I really liked the imagery you put in this haiku--very jampacked indeed! Enjoy reading your writes! & I look forward to reading more :)
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Date: 10/19/2009 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win...I love all these Haikus and am glad I didn't have to judge. Marty
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Date: 10/18/2009 11:43:00 PM
congratulations on winning in Raul's contest..well deserved win-Charma
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Date: 10/18/2009 9:13:00 PM
A very lovely read indeed my friend. Congrats on you win in Raul's Contest. I thank you for your welcomed commets onmy work as well :-) God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/16/2009 8:05:00 PM
Dear Ismael, Congratulations on your beautiful Haiku win. Lainie
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your WIN in Rauls contest with this beautiful Haiku! Beautiful images, Ismael! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Ismael. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations Ismael! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:39:00 PM
Ismael, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 10/15/2009 4:43:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for a creative view. Enjoyed it! Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 10/15/2009 9:06:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/15/2009 12:07:00 AM
Excellent viuals Ismael.Thank you for your welcome comments & kind words to day.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/14/2009 3:27:00 PM
Beautiful picture piece, Ismael! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/14/2009 2:44:00 PM
Nicely done Haiku. I can see the scene. Keep writing. Good luck in the contest. Sara
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