Home » Poems » Paula Goldsmith » My Rose

My Rose

My loving beautiful Rose, I love you from your head to your painted toes. I called her everyday until our love grew, I will dream of you and will not be blue. When we hug sweetness fills the air, you bring such a wonderful loving flair. When I am in my lovely garden having tea~cake, I see beautiful roses for your name sake. Red ones for your rosy checks not your hips, pretty pink ones for your soft lips. Yellow ones for your golden hair fill me with many sighs, ocean blue ones for your bright pretty eyes. My garden has a very sweet smell like roses and a pear, a beautiful scent like the one in your golden hair. Date Written:7/17/2022 2 Place Rhyme Rumi Quote Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2022 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Very creative in that you wrote it in a voice different from your own. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2022 2:10:00 PM

Paula, lovely and congratulations on your win in the contest ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2022 2:25:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win with "My Rose." It is good to see you. Glad you enjoyed "My Rose." It was a fun write. I Have a very blessed day.................

Len Gasun

Date: 8/15/2022 1:10:00 AM

This is so beautiful and sweet my dear friend Paula. So delighted to read it this afternoon. I love it and faving it. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your shining win! God bless you and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 11:02:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win with "My Rose." It is good to see you. I see FAV??? You just made my day. "Thank You" Glad you love My Rose write. I love roses. Pink ones are the beat. Have a very blessed day with hugs...........

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/14/2022 3:13:00 PM

BIG congrats on your podium win, Paula. A poem beautiful like a rose.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 10:58:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win with "My Rose." It is good to see you. I love roses so I just had to write about them. Have a very blessed day...........

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2022 11:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful second place win Paula. I am enjoying reading every one of these romantic poems, tho some have sadness in them too. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 9:44:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win with "My Rose." It is good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this write. Love and roses go together. Have a very blessed day...........

Valsa George

Date: 8/12/2022 9:31:00 PM

"When we hug sweetness fills the air, you bring such a wonderful loving flair." Beautiful lines. Congratulations dear Paula on your sweet win !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 9:41:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win with "My Rose." It is good to see you. Glad you like my write as love fills the air. I love roses they are so very pretty. Have a very blessed day......................

Ann Foster

Date: 7/22/2022 10:11:00 AM

Ocean blue... eyes... so pretty. Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 10:25:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit. It is good to see you. Glad you like "My Rose" write. Roses are so very pretty. Have a very blessed day......................

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 7/20/2022 5:37:00 PM

Wow this is so beautiful Paula. I'm saving this to my faves. Have a lovely day my friend :-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 10:23:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit. It is good to see you. Glad you like "My Rose" write. I see you are doing a faves??? Thank You. You made my day. Have a very blessed day......................

Joseph May

Date: 7/20/2022 3:11:00 AM

A gard3n full of lovely roses, Wonderful write Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2022 9:15:00 AM

Thank You, for your visit. It is good to see you. Glad you like "My Rose" write. I love pink roses the best. It was a fun one to write. Have a very blessed day......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2022 1:49:00 PM

very pretty. Wasn't that a cool topic for the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:23:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit. It is good to see you. Glad you like this write. Yes, a cool topic for the contest. I really enjoyed this one/write. Have a very blessed day......................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/19/2022 2:35:00 AM

Well done Paula...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:22:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit. It is good to see you. Glad you like this rose write. Have a very blessed day......................

Michael Tor

Date: 7/18/2022 6:08:00 PM

Roses are Special and so is this wonderful Poem of yours about them. God bless you Paula...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:21:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit. It is good to see you. Glad you like "My Rose" write. You are so right, roses are a very special flower. Have a very blessed day......................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/18/2022 3:07:00 PM

Your words are the epitome of beauty dear Paula, like you I love the rose the best, amongst all flowers she is the most regal. gl in the contest, h

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2022 3:29:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit and for your good luck. It is good to see you. Glad you like my write. I love roses (pink the best). Yes, roses are very regal. Have a very blessed day......................

Bill Baker

Date: 7/17/2022 3:51:00 PM

Great entry for the contest, Paula, good luck! I enjoyed the imagery and the love you showed. Hugs, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed My Rose write. Have a very blessed day......................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/17/2022 3:20:00 PM

Hello Paula, the rose is my favourite flower the lavender comes next. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/20/2022 3:45:00 PM

Hello Paula, you are welcome. I like your rose poem. I like pink, red, and yellow roses I love lavender to. Red first then pink yellow last. Oh! I never used lavender in cream. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2022 3:24:00 PM

Thank You, for your visit. It is good to see you. Glad you like My Rose. I am with you, I love both roses (pink the best) and lavender (I use in creams. Have a very blessed day......................