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Month Eleven's Thrill-- Infinitians

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Numb… yet month's spell brings thrill of frost On dyed road, bronze leaves, flesh as Veiled star tints pale elm. Oh, Eve… a low pitch hymn Marks homes’ calm to Bear grace while Earth spills Runes. Charlotte J Puddifoot's Contest Infinite Infinitians 10/11/2015

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Skat A

Date: 10/19/2015 11:25:00 PM

Nette, Congrats on your win. --SKAT :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/19/2015 4:29:00 PM

Wow...Congrats Nettie! hugs!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/17/2015 2:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/17/2015 7:06:00 AM

Congrats Nette on this wonderful win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/17/2015 1:18:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Nette!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2015 1:09:00 AM

Nice win nette!!!!!!!!!!

James Inman

Date: 10/16/2015 9:16:00 PM

Beautiful words.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/16/2015 8:34:00 PM

Hi nette: Congratulations on a beautiful tribute to November.

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2015 7:55:00 PM

A challenge to find one syllable words that would sound so beautiful. But you did !! Congrats to you dear Nette!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/16/2015 7:43:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your 1st place win it was well deserved:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 7:32:00 PM

I absolutely LOVE what you did here, Nette. Wow, so far this is my favorite! Congrats for your win.

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/16/2015 6:51:00 PM

I am always astounded at the unique combination of words that you use to spin an intriguing poetic tale, Nette. Great job! Congrats on your win :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2015 4:29:00 PM

wonderful imagery as ever nette - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/16/2015 4:18:00 PM

i knew this was going to place at the top as soon as i read it! beautiful imagery and amazing use of single syllable words, proving once again what a skilled poet you are - i particularly like the ending "earth spills/runes" - congrats on your 1st place in my contest!