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I admire you and still love you. I want you each and every moment. Even if with mystery you apply. Even if you decide to delay. I opened myself up to you and with this I do not regret. With you I can be free because I know you won’t be mine. I have no reason to cry. I have no tear on my eyes. I know u won’t be mine. You’ll never judge anything I say. Every feeling for you I make sure to say. You’re the smile on my face which ease my way. I’m dreaming and I know it never meant to be.

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Akash Ripper

Date: 1/5/2014 10:57:00 AM

NADIA, , Your poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. AKASH :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* AKASH

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 11/29/2013 11:21:00 PM

A wonderful write,kudos! Welcome to poetrysoup,here u find d poetic treasures in vast quantities. Alwaz, Based oin Belief

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2013 3:43:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Nadia ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Nadia Rabehi
Date: 11/29/2013 4:37:00 PM

thx lot ;i appreciate ur encouragement,and hope u'll be back.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2013 2:22:00 PM

Nadia, , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Nadia Rabehi
Date: 11/29/2013 2:50:00 PM

thank you so much for ur warm words,and i hope u like my humble words,'m trying my best,i wish u check from time to time and advice me to improve my writing.