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July's Evening

With watchful eyes, I follow July’s evening Spread its blended palette Of cerulean tints, of lavish varnish; That I enter into a mystery unfolding Before me—oh an avian carousal Across a blazing skyscape-- Where jays and nightingales reel From the warmth of moonlight, afire… This regalia unseen through July's furnace Cooling for now Amid interludes of pewter pewter rain: Above, birds form a leafy sketch Through the ever- gushing cobalt of heaven’s glow; The freshness of dew bathing My skin, my drizzle of prayers. August 2018 Premiere Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 8/10/2018 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lovely poem!
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Date: 8/9/2018 9:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Nette - blessings and best wishes for more! :-)
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Date: 8/8/2018 9:29:00 AM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/18/2018 4:29:00 PM
Nicely interwoven these interludes of blue and none so aptly gifted and erudite as you. As an aside, our eyes become increasingly sensitive to blue at evening’s onset when glow vivid flowers of that hue.
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:21:00 PM
Love this line, "an avian carousal Across teal skyscape--"; your poem was truly a joy to read.
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Date: 7/16/2018 11:39:00 AM
You express beauty effortlessly! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/16/2018 9:50:00 AM
Nette.. your poem was like riding a carousal of bliss. The love the birds, and adore the hues, romantic raindrops, bring my kind of blues!
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Date: 7/15/2018 9:36:00 AM
Great entry, best I've read, best wishes Nette...
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Date: 7/15/2018 2:19:00 AM
Wonderful poetry, nette. Very classy!
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Date: 7/14/2018 6:02:00 PM
A July evening in all its glory, well written verse Nette. Tom. Good luck.
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Date: 7/14/2018 4:43:00 PM
Colorful, eventful, beautiful..a lovely evening captured in your poem, nette.
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Date: 7/14/2018 3:57:00 PM
Beautiful poetry nette, a joy to read this. good luck in contest.
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Date: 7/14/2018 3:14:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful and pleasant to read Nette :)
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Date: 7/14/2018 2:15:00 PM
- Soft and beautifully described Nette, best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/14/2018 1:40:00 PM
Your words took flight and treated the reader to a glimpse of your heart and peak at your poetic talent and imagination. Emile.
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