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In a Swell of Mourning

The sunset sets with passion a palette of solstice, fire, and goldenrod glean my grief with brute force with a mallet. Nub of anger and tears bind while thorns prod. It looks to take possession of my heart, sharp, jagged, stabbing, cutting off feeling leaving me cold and callous set apart from truth I'm so desperately reeling. Despite efforts to change it won't withdraw allowing me to breathe life and be whole. I fleetingly forget the pleasing awe as he used to skim and feast on my soul. It has no ending; it won't let me go; I am dragged off into its undertow. 1/1/2019

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Date: 1/15/2019 11:45:00 AM
Amazing sonnet Eve, so sorry didn't make the cut in my contest, was very close though!
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Date: 1/6/2019 10:14:00 AM
Back with more congrats, Eve.
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Date: 1/5/2019 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Eve! :)
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Date: 1/5/2019 7:47:00 PM
Nicely done, Eve!:-) Thanks for taking part in my contest! Loved this poem!
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Date: 1/5/2019 7:03:00 PM
Lovely, Eve. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 1/5/2019 10:05:00 AM
New, new, new... Its beauty, its expression, its creativity and its flare... This is breath taking and this year will definitely give us the fulfillment we seek. Wonderful write full of envious sentences...
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Date: 1/4/2019 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations for your win with this deeply emotional, painful verse. I am sorry for your pain.
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Date: 1/4/2019 10:57:00 AM
This is gripping...and the second stanza is painful and deep. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2019 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations for your great win Eve! :)
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Date: 1/4/2019 9:45:00 AM
An excellent poem Eve, congrats. :)
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Date: 1/2/2019 7:22:00 PM
Well done! I wish you the best in the contest.
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Date: 1/2/2019 6:31:00 PM
Wow....this poem expresses misery in capital letters Eve! A dramatic write that is memorable! I wish you a happy new year my friend! xxoo
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Date: 1/2/2019 4:16:00 PM
Your loss is palpable Eve. Please accept my condolences.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/2/2019 4:27:00 PM
Thank you, Jean. Hugs
Date: 1/2/2019 3:28:00 AM
aww eve your pain is so raw my friend, the final couplet hits so hard. :-( hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/2/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thank you my friend Hugs Eve
Date: 1/2/2019 1:27:00 AM
Eve, such passionate poetry, I too must say WOW!!!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/2/2019 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur. It is only because the pain is still raw like Jan mentioned..
Date: 1/2/2019 12:09:00 AM
"I am dragged off in its undertow" explains grief so much more heartfelt than most can ever do. Wow, Eve,Wow!
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/2/2019 12:12:00 AM
Thank you, Caren, the pain is still fresh. Hugs Eve

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